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Giant Fat Guys
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  Chapter 19: Bring me more of that potion   (ID #1025169)
    an addition by: ShinseiKyouto  More by this author

Goku rubbed his gurgling belly with a grin on his face and then stared his son's in the eye again.

"Go and bring me some more of that potion!" he said.

"Huh?" Both boys had a surprised look on their face as they heard their father direct them to do this.

Goku tilted his head, wondering why they were having this reaction. "What's wrong guys? Gohan, I thought you wanted me to get bigger!"

Gohan blushed as Goten looked at him with a questioning look. "Well yeah but...I guess I'm just surprised since you were so reluctant before! It was just a little weird."

Goku patted Gohan on the back and said, "Well, I've been doing something thinking and I REALLY like the way this all feels, so I've decided to make the feeling even better! So bring it here and lets see how much a few good chugs will do for me!"

Gohan grinned and cheered. "Awesome! I'll go get it right away!"

He dropped to his knees and crawled over to the house, his belly making it a bit difficult to get down low, while Goten frowned and crossed his arms. "I wanted to get bigger..."

Goku laughed and said, "Sorry Goten but this is more of an adults thing anyway!"

Goten shoved Goku in the chest, the surprised man falling onto his back, not expecting this kind of violent reaction from his youngest son. Goten sat down on top of Goku's belly and held his father down. "No way! I'm just as big as you and Gohan so I'm not getting left out of this!"

Goku laughed again and said, "Size doesn't have anything to do with it! You may be as big as me, but you're still just as young as you were. So, sorry, but this is all you get Goten."

Goten suddenly jumped up and said, "Then I'll just take the bottle for myself!"

He ran over to the house, Goku struggling to his feet to chase after him. Gohan, who was laying on his side and reaching in through the doorway, his eyes scanning the kitchen from the window, was oblivious until he felt the ground vibrating under his formerly little brother's feet. He looked up just as Goten got close, dropping to the ground and slamming his hand through the window, going straight for the bottle.

"Goten! What are you doing?" Gohan said with a stern tone, swatting his brother's hand with his own. "This is dad's stuff! You can't just steal it!"

"Come on! This is for all of us!" Goten argued.

Gohan had always intended the bottle to be completely for Goku. It was his kindhearted father who had wanted to share it with him and then with Goten. He had only even gone THIS far because his father wanted him to. Now that he was enjoying being big and wanted to be even bigger Gohan wasn't about to deny his father just because his little brother was being childish. As they fought, their hands knocking over several other items and bottles as well as crashing into cupboards, Goku ran over. Goten saw him coming and, with a quick move, ducked under Gohan's hand and grabbed the bottle. "Hah! Gotcha!"

He yanked his arm out and tried to quickly get to his feet. Goku, however, quickly grabbed him and took the bottle out of his hand. Goten struggled but wasn't nearly as strong as his father, despite sharing his height. Gohan quickly took the bottle away from Goten and Goku let Goten go, grabbing the bottle from Gohan as he did so. Goten kicked at the ground, not looking into either of his family member's eyes, looking both sullen and a little ashamed at how he acted. Goku smiled and ruffled Goten's hair. "Don't feel bad Goten. You just got carried away."

Goten muttered, "Sorry." as Goku uncorked the bottle. Gohan's eyes were shining as he watched Goku lift the bottle to his lips. With a quick motion, Goku began to drink, his throat working as he gulped down more and more of the potion. There was more in the tiny bottle than it seemed, Goku stopped after having taken quite a few big gulps. He sighed and wiped his mouth, corking the bottle again. There seemed to be about a quarter of it left. The swelling sensation quickly filled his gut again, the fleshy orb already pushing out further and further, his body stretching up taller, his muscles even growing a little larger. Suddenly, Goku opened his mouth and unleashed a MASSIVE burp, the wind blowing Goten and Gohan's hair back slightly. The ferocity of the burp caused Goten to look up in shock as Goku's body exploded upward in size!

Before Gohan even knew he was in danger, Goku's belly slammed into him, lifting the teenager off the ground and into the air as Goku's body expanded larger and larger. Gohan gripped the tight globe as best he could, slowly slipping down it as his father grew. Panicking (and in his panic forgetting he could fly) Gohan looked for something he could grab on to. Luckily, Goku's belly button was just above him. He reached up and pulled himself into the ever expanding cave, sitting comfortable in the deep belly button. He looked down and was shocked to see his house was becoming nothing more than a tiny dot next to his father's massive toe. Scanning the ground, he barely saw Goten, trapped on top of his father's foot, unsure of what to do.

As all this went on, Goku himself stared around in delight, everything shrinking down to miniature sizes before his eyes. He rubbed his huge gut, the swelling sensation filling him more fiercely than ever before, his belly hard and tight while his muscles grew larger to help support his ever expanding body. He leaned forward and chuckled as he saw his second toe plow through his former house. "Guess we don't need that anymore!"

Gohan heard his father's voice rumble over the landscape, the voice of a thunderous god. He smiled as he heard his father's proclamation. Who needed a house when an enormous belly button was so much warmer and cozier? He laid out on his stomach, resting his head on his arms as he looked out with a sigh. This was EXACTLY what he had wanted.

Soon enough, Goku's growth came to a halt, the trees of the forest barely tickling the bottoms of his toes. He stretched and put his arms behind his head, looking around. He spotted East City in the distance and grinned. "I wonder how big the buildings are now..."

With a new purpose in mind, Goku turned and started lumbering towards the city, the ground shaking and cracking under his tremendous weight.
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