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Body Swapper
You bump into someone on school and switch bodies with them.
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This choice: Your mother, now his, opens the door | Go Back

  Chapter 5: Your mother, now his, opens the door   (ID #990668)
    an addition by: PonyGirl  More by this author

Before you have a chance to answer, the woman who used to be your mother opens the door! She looks at the two of you and then down at you. “Young lady, I don't know who you are, or what you are doing in my son's room, but a girl being here is not permitted in this house. I am going to have to ask you to leave!” You try to open your mouth, “No explanations! Leave now you little tramp!”

You are devastated! First, you are being thrown out of your own home! Second, your mother called you a tramp! You can't help but to start crying as you walk our of your house. You keep walking, not even sure where you are going. You feel the small breasts you now have moving as you walk, and you feel material rubbing between your legs in a way that it never could have been before. You hate that you are a girl! You need to do whatever to get back to your own body! Suddenly you stop. You realize where you are! You are on the street where Carina lives! Somehow, you knew where 'home' was! You begin to wonder what else you 'know' as Carina.

Just then you almost bump into someone! You adjust your glasses and find your self saying automatically, “Oh Jack! Sorry!” It is your old classmate, Jack Riley. This is not good. You bullied him mercilessly for years! Now he was head and shoulders taller than you, and you are a thirteen year old girl while he is a sixteen year old athlete.

Before your panic sets in, Jack says, “Hi Carina. What's up? You seem like your mind was somewhere else. Is something wrong?”

You sigh out loud in relief. Of course! Jack does not see John Wilson, he sees Carina! Duh! You try to smile, “Thanks, but I am okay. I was just over at John's house and...”

Jack cuts you off, “ John? Not John Wilson? That jerk bully! I know you think he is cute for some reason, but please Carina, don't get involved with him!”

You feel yourself getting defensive, “Look, I know that I, I mean he, used to bully you when you were younger, but can't you put that behind you now?”

Jack frowned, “Once a jerk always a jerk! And he doesn't want you Carina. He goes for the cheerleader bimbo types, not the smart girls like you.”

You are offended and complimented at the same time, “Well! I will have you know Jack, that John asked me to be his girlfriend!”

Jack looked shocked! “Really? What did you say?”

You huff, “His mother came in and threw me out before I could answer him! She even called me a little tramp!”

Jack nodded, “See? Even his mother is a jerk. They are a family of jerks. If he really asked you that, it is just because he wants to screw you just so he can say he did. After he does, he will dump you fo the next girl on his list.”

You get indignant! “So I am not good enough? I mean, he isn't? I mean, oh, I will say yes just to prove you wrong!”

Before Jack can answer, your/Carina's mother calls out to you, “Carina! Get in here this instant and do your chores! And I mean NOW young lady!”

You are not happy about chores or being called 'young lady', but you are glad the encounter with Jack is over. How dare he call you and your family jerks! When you get into you new home, everything looks oddly familiar even though you have never been here before. You soon find that you are the but of jokes and more of your three older brothers. And your 'chores' consist of doing the wash, cleaning the bathroom, and washing dishes! Where will you get time to study? Then you wonder why you even thought about that!

Outside the house, Jack smiles. His plan for helping Carina and getting revenge on John is working out fine so far!
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