This choice: Eric convinces her somehow that she looks horrendous and Val commits suicide! | Go Back Chapter 5: Val Commits Suicide, Something Unexpected Happens (ID #670196) an addition by: XSV Lust ![View xsvlust's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author "Fucked, yes you are so FUCKED!!!" Val quickly dropped the cube to the floor. Her muscles tightened with every step toward Eric." Please don't kill me! I'll do anything, anything i tell you!" Val suddenly stopped and thought about what he had just said. "Anything?" she asked commandingly. " Yes, anything you wish or want to be done!" Val considered her options: Kill him and get it over with or make him kill his girlfriend. " I want you to kill her." she pointed straight at the amazon Jenny." No i cant do that. She has been my girlfriend for a long time.""Well, its either you or her; pick." Val said. " You will have to kill me then, because she is my life and without her i don't want to live."
This hit Valerie very hard. The whole reason why she gained the power was because she saw the way he looked at Jenny." Really you would give your life for this wimp? "Yes, I would give my life and then some for her. I love her." Val started to look at herself. All the muscle,breast and ass, but yet she didn't get what she wanted; Eric." Eric I have to ask you something; Do you find me attractive?" " Yes you are still attractive, but you looked much better before." Another hit to the heart. Val was very angry at Eric by this point and hated the way she looked." Well then you can have her!!!" she yelled. With this she reached into her purse and removed the revolver that she kept in case of an emergency. She flipped the safety off and put the cold tip to her temple." All I ever wanted was to be loved, and now no-one can love me looking like this."
She Fired.
Eric stood there bewildered thinking about the previous events.Then he snapped to and looked at Val's fallen body. A whit light poured from the body into the cube.The light faded and behind it left a very normal Valerie, except she was dead.Eric saw in his peripheral vision the cube. Somehow the cube altered, it was now glowing red instead of the luminescent green. He walked over to the source of this agony and looked inside of the cube. A perfect rendering of him and Jenny together formed. One thing he noticed was that Jenny was the same size as she had always been. As he watched the model transformed into what Jenny had become. The thing that happened next was so unexpected that he almost instantly got a hard on. Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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