This choice: I choose someone | Go Back Chapter 11: Timid Raven (ID #625539) an addition by: HellaPinoy ![View hellapinoy's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author Then I saw her. She was still sitting down on the ground, but seemed to be using her peripheral vision to see who I was looking at. Then, I chose.
"Uhh, I guess I'll pick.....gray Raven" I said. She looked at me with a blush and had her fingers loosely placed on her lips. Then she looked away but still faced me.
"Gray Raven it is, then", yellow Raven concluded. Gray Raven seemed to reluctantly walk towards me. She sat down in front of me and went back to the same position she was in before, with her knees up and arms around her legs. She wasn't looking at me.
"It's ok, Raven. I don't bite." I tried to comfort her. She finally looked at me.
"...T-thanks...." she whispered. "....I'm sorry that I have to do this to you..."
"No no no. It's ok. Really. I don't mind." She gave me a tiny smile and took off her remaining boot.
"....Uhh....what do I do now...?" she asked yellow Raven.
"I think you know what to do." she said to me. I gave her a slight nod, then I reached for gray Raven's feet as she slowly moved it towards me.
I gave it a quick but thorough examination before I placed both of her soles on my face. She had her fingers on her lips again. I held her right foot on the left half of my face as I licked her left foot. Her feet were silky smooth and very soft. It had the smell of sweaty palms. I rubbed her foot against my face while I licked the other. Then i put her toes into my mouth and began sucking all the small sweaty moisture from her feet.
I started getting really into it. I removed her foot from my face for a while. I slowly turned my body while still sucking her other foot until I was laying on my back so that she would be facing the right side of my head. After she firmly rested her left foot on my forehead, I turned my head towards her and held the other foot with both of my hands, sucking her toes and heel and licking the bottom of her foot. I was delighted to feel her foot slowly rubbing my face and forehead.
I began licking her ankle and slowly worked my way up to her thighs, but she was too timid to tell me to stop. She had her leg fully extended for me. Red Raven saw this after a few moments and slapped the back of my head, telling me to stay on the foot, so I obeyed.
I laid on my stomach and put both of her big toes into my mouth. I ran my tongue around both of the toes, then I licked the soft underside of her toes, also getting in between them.
But as soon as I was getting comfortable, Yellow Raven stopped me. I was dismayed, but I slowly placed her feet down, put her boots back on, and gave her a weak smile, and she returned the favor. When none of the Ravens were looking, she gave me a quick kiss on the lips before I stood up. She gave me occassional smiles after.
As soon as I stood up, I was slapped on the cheek. It felt familiar. I looked and saw that it was original Raven that slapped me.
"So....are we done here?" she asked.
"Yes, ma'am." yellow Raven said. "I believe he did....exceptionally well today."
"That's good to hear. I suppose I'll be taking him back now."
"Yes, ma'am." she repeated.
The original Raven grabbed me by my arm and pulled me with her to the exit. I stumbled as she pulled me since I was looking behind. There she was, still sitting down, but this time she was looking at me. Actually, she was waving good-bye. She had a sad look on her face. I managed to wave back at her before going through the portal.
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