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Bleach Girls Feet Battle!
The Girls of Bleach do battle... With their feet!
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  Chapter 7: Rukia's fears, realized   (ID #1133922)
    an addition by: melroser76  More by this author

"What are you planning to do to me?", Rukia asked with a sense of fear lingering.

Rangiku said nothing as she prepared to take off her customized air-tight sandals off her feet, along with her unwashed socks. As she was a busy yet lazy vice-captain, she was constantly on the go. Later, a powerful stench of vinegar and sweat lingered around Rukia's holding cell, and soon, Rukia herself noticed the stench. She was overpowered by the smell that lingered and attempted to close her nose but to no avail.

"What's the matter? Do my feet smell bad? Why not get to know them up close!" said Rangiku as she immediately shut her nose using both her toes, depriving her of that much needed air. Not to mention, she placed her sweaty sock on her mouth, not allowing her to breathe and letting her taste her hard, sweaty work at the same time. Rukia was losing herself.

"Rukia, you know what happens if I let go of my toes?" Rangiku warned as Rukia was trying to ignore the thought of what would happen if she did. And then...
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