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Bleach Girls Feet Battle!
The Girls of Bleach do battle... With their feet!
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  Chapter 8: Orihime is forced to inhale Rukis foul foot stench   (ID #828930)
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Orihime won't give up yet! She shakes her head, wich smears even more footsweat on her poor face and just says:"No! They stink horrible!" Rukia laughs and says:"Fine, have it your way..." She then pushes the sole of her feet on Orihimes mouth hard and pinches her nose between her big and second toe. Orihimes eyes wide in panik as she realises that she can't breath at all now! She moves her head around and tries to say something, but it is muffled and Rukia just grins evily. Orihime is getting dizzy, colorful spots are dancing in her vision and her face turns purple. Suddenly, Rukia releases Orihimes nose and Orihime is forced to take a deep sniff right between Rukias smily toes. The insane stench poisions Orihimes enitire body and she feels like she is going to be knocked out again. She yells with all her might but it is completely muffled by Rukias soft, warm sole. "Oh, what was that?" Rukia says and wiggles her toes in Orihimes face. Orihime takes another sniff and the putrid, cheesy smell almost knocks her out. Suddenly, Rukia pulls her feet a bit back and Orihime can speak. "I AM SAYING I... oh sorry... I will smell your feet... just don't do that again, I beg you!" "Hehe, it's ok, I won't... as long as you behave well! And now, smell my feet and be happy that I don't suffocate you to death!" Orihime instantly starts taking deep breaths through her nose, even though the powerfull stench of Rukias unwashed feet is assaulting her senses every time. But Orihimes will is completely broken and she just takes the torture. She sniffs every spot of Rukias sweaty feet for several minutes, except for the toes. "So... how does it smell, footslave?" "I already told you, it's horrible. It smells very cheesy and and like some rotten... OUCH!" Rukia started to slap Orihimes face hard with her feet. "No, I want you to say They smell good. Tell me that you like the smell!" Orihimes cheeks turn red because of the hard slaps and her eyes start watering. Almost crying, she mutters:"They... they smell good. I like the smell." "Haha, good job. Now, let's smell between my toes as well, ok?" "But... yes..." Orihime says, slides her nose in Rukias toe cleaveage and starts taking deep sniffs. The stench is almost killing her, but she doesn't stop. She is getting sicker and weaker again and that doesn't escape Rukia. "Hey, are you falling asleep again? Tsk, tsk, we really need to work on that. But you did a good job, take a little break." Rukia removes her feet from Orihimes face and Orihime takes a few deep breaths. Even though the air in the room stinks like Rukias feet, Orihime feels a bit better already. After some minutes, Rukia says:"Hehe, I'm feeling a little sorry for you... But you are almost done for today! Now, smell my other foot!" Orihime is bursting into tears and says:"Please, don't..." but Rukia just says:"Oh, you want to be smothered again..." And Orihime starts smelling immediatly. Rukia giggles and says:"Good girl..." She gently strokes Orihimes hair as she sniffs her warm, smelly feet. "I am sorry... I don't think I can last much longer..." Orihime weakly says. "Oh come on! You are doing such a good job! Just smell my toes and we are finished, ok?" Orihime starts sniffing Rukias toes, but she is already too weak to stand it. After every breath, she is coughing heavily and Rukia nows that she would pass out soon. Rukia pulls her foot back, shakes her head and says:"That was not too good. I expect more from you! Because of that, you have to do one more thing for me today!" Orihime gulps. Rukia wants her to...
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