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Bleach Girls Feet Battle!
The Girls of Bleach do battle... With their feet!
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  Chapter 6: Smelling Rukias shoe   (ID #828887)
    an addition by: saicrit  More by this author

...how about my shoes?" Without waiting for an answer, Rukia takes one, lifts it to her face and takes a little whiff. Instantly, she moves her head away and grimaces. "Phew, they smell really strong, it doesn't surprise me, though. Oh well, you deserve to be punished anyway..." "What? What did I do? Oh no..." Rukia has already pushed the opening of her shoe over Orihimes poor nose. Orihime takes a sniff and the powerfull, cheesy odour hits her with all it's force. Orihime starts coughing heavily and says:"Oh my god, it's awful! Please, release me now!" Rukia laughs again. "Haha, oh not yet. So, how do they smell?" Orihime really takes another whiff. "*sniff* Arrgh... *cough* totally disgusting, even worse then your feet!" "Oh, you're just saying that because you didn't get the chance to smell between my toes... yet!" "This is so disgusting... I thought you were my friend! This is a weird thing to do to your friends, Rukia!" "Really? I don't think so... After all, you were in my way long enough, it's about time someone teaches you a lesson! And now shut up and smell my shoe!" Orihime refuses to do so and takes deep breathes through her mouth. "I said SMELL!" Rukia yells and pushes the sole of her right foot very hard against Orihimes mouth. Orihime shudders as she feels the warm, sweaty flesh touching her lips. But the worst thing is, she can't breath through her mouth now! Orihime takes another sniff and starts shaking her head a bit. "Yes, now that's what I wanna see!" Rukia says and giggles. Orihime tries to yell something but it's muffeled under Rukias sweaty sole. Orihime is forced to take another breath and the strong, cheesy stench is really driving her crazy now! She moves her head to the side and buckles her whole body with all her might, but it's useless, the horrible shoe won't go away. "Haha, yeah, keep moving! Entertain me a bit!" Rukia laughs, provoking Orihime further. She tries to escape with all of her power, but unfortunately, it only results in her breathing harder. And every breath fills her lungs with the toxic stench of Rukias reeking shoe. Orihime is getting dizzy and weak and eventually stops moving at all. "Aww, are we tired already? It's ok, just keep smelling my shoe." Rukia says and giggles. Orihime can't take the smell much longer, everything seems to be fading to black slowly...
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