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She woke up sometime later in a dim room. She groggily tried to stand, but discovered that she was tied up to a pillar. "Nice of you to finally wake up, Matsumoto-san!" "Yor...Yoruichi?" Rangiku's vision finally cleared and she saw Yoruichi sitting on a chair in front of her and her zanpakuto lying against the wall at the opposite side of the room. "What is the meaning of this!? Untie me this instant!" Rangiku demanded angrily. "Oh, not until I have a little fun with you. You see, you insulted my hygiene, and that's not something I take kindly to, even if it IS true! So now, I'm going to have to punish you," Yoruichi responded. "How, by tying me up?" Rangiku asked. "Oh, no. That's not the punishment." "Then what is?" Yoruichi responded by removing her VERY well-worn training boots that she had been wearing without socks. The smell was so powerful that it made Rangiku grimace involuntarily from a full five feet away. "See these boots?" Yoruichi said, "They're the only pair of shoes I have, and I NEVER wear them with socks. It makes my feet stink, but I don't mind; I find socks uncomfortable. Oh, and I don't remember the last time I washed my feet, but I can assure you, it has been a long, LONG time!" "So you have smelly feet, so what does that have to do with me?" Rangiku asked, afraid she already knew the answer. "I think you can guess," Yoruichi responded. She then lifted her own incredibly sweaty and smelly foot up to her face and took an experimental sniff. She grimaced dramatically. "Whew! Man! I would really hate to be you right now, Rangiku-san!" she teased. Then without warning, she scooted her chair up to Rangiku and shoved her sweaty, smelly feet in Rangiku's face firmly. Rangiku struggled desperately against Yoruichi's foot, but to no avail; Yoruichi was just too strong for her. Then there was the smell. She already got a preview of the odor from five feet away that was bad enough to make her sick, but now it was right in her face, and the only way to draw in air to breath was through her nose, and inhaling the scent of sweaty, smelly, unwashed feet that was intensified by the fact that the owner had recently been training, and from the smell it was obvious that it was a very hard work out. The smell was so awful that Rangiku actually felt light-headed and felt like she would throw up. "Are you enjoying smelling my sweaty, stinky feet? Because I sure enjoy watching you do it!" Yoruichi laughed evilly, "They usually stink anyway, but today, they smell particularly bad, don't they? Aren't you so lucky? That's right, sniff those sweaty, stinky, unwashed feet that have been training really hard! You know you love the smell of my stinky feet as much as I do!" Rangiku struggled away long enough to shout, "YOU BITCH!! GET YOUR STINKY FEET OFF OF MY FACE!! AND WASH YOUR FEET REGULARLY LIKE NORMAL PEOPLE DO!!" Yoruichi responded with a laugh, "Ha ha ha ha ha! I don't think I will! I've always enjoyed having smelly feet and I never knew why until now! This is the most fun I've had in my life! Who would have though that torturing people with my stinky feet would be so much fun? I should do this more often!" "What the hell is the matter with you? Why are you doing this?" Rangiku asked. "I'm a sociopath! Duh!" And with that, she firmly pinned Rangiku's face with her feet. The exertion from the struggle was causing Yoruichi's feet to sweat and smell even worse by the second. Rangiku could not take much more of the foul stench of Yoruichi's feet in her face much longer, especially when it was gradually intensifying. She began to get dizzy and her vision started swimming. "Holy shit!" she thought to herself, "I didn't think it was possible for feet to smell this bad! Even I deal with my own foot odor occasionally, but nothing like this! This is positively awful!" Eventually, she couldn't handle any more and passed out from the awful smell of Yoruichi's sweaty feet. "Hmm. That's no fun! I can't torture her with my stinky feet if she's unconscious!" Yoruichi said, disappointed. "What am I supposed to do now?" She wondered. "I know! I'll... Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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