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  Chapter 13: Crummiest girlfriend ever, but there is still hope   (ID #980782)
    an addition by: SonicV  More by this author

Later that night, Ramona was sporting one of her classic ensembles; a brown T-Shirt, a blue jacket with white stripes down the sleeves, a blue and pink skirt with a grey belt, pink fishnet stalking and boots, all of which went great with her short pink hair, eye shadow and blush. Given that this was her and Scott’s anniversary, she was going to dress up a little bit more, but then she heard they were eating at home. She was ready to give Pilgrim a piece of her mind, but when she saw that he had singlehandedly whipped up teriyaki chicken, cornbread, mashed potatoes, and chocolate moose for dessert, she shut up once she started stuffing her face.

“MMMM! You keep this up, I’m going to get fat and need you to make more food.” Ramona happily rubbed her full tummy. Scott wasn't the only one very happy about their relationship. She thought she was very lucky to find someone that didn't just treat her well and was cute, but could had enough skill in the kitchen to own his own five start restaurant rather than just work in a two star one. She had no idea where he had learned his culinary skills, but she wasn’t complaining.

“Don’t let me stop you.” Scott smiled. He then however got a curious look from Ramona that quickly had him babbling like an idiot “The food! I meant the food! I meant eat up, not that I would want you to get fat, not that I’d leave you if you were, I’m not that kinda a guy. Even big girls need les…should I just give you’re present now?”

Ramona rolled her eyes at her boyfriends cute freak-out and said “Please do.”

So the two exchanged gifts; Scott nearly squealed like a schoolgirl when he opened his to see DC Universe Online! Finally, owning a PS3 finally paid off. Ramona however openly gasped in awe at what she had received. Holding it up in her hands, she revealed a diamond necklace, with a silver rose on it, and an inscription that said “Ramona: The most beautiful flower in the world.” How could Scott afford that?” Well, when you fight people who burst into coins once beaten you’ll be financially secure for a while.

“Scott I…I love it!” she exclaimed at the unexpected gift. Putting so much thought and effort behind a gift was so unlike the Scott she first met. It was just more proof that her goofy boyfriend was finally maturing. She quickly put it on and then wrapped her arms around her man to pull him into a deep kiss. Scott melted in her arms as he felt her tongue swirl inside his mouth, and he wanted nothing more than to continue, but with the way he was feeling right now, a kiss was not going to be enough.

“Ramona,” he said once he broke the kiss. She was ready to throw Scott down and get her tongue back in his throat, but fortunately, her man had a good excuse why that tongue should be speaking.

“I was wondering…what do you say we make tonight the first time we…?” there were many ways Scott could finish that sentence, some romantic, some so vulgar it’d repulse any woman. Ultimately, he said what he wanted to say in the most clear way possible “You know?”

“First time?....Oh man! I can't believe we haven't screwed yet. Why didn't you bring this up sooner? I would have thrown you to the floor months ago!” Ramona groaned and lightly smacked Scott on the shoulder. Scott barely felt the blow, his mind still trying to process that he could have had sex with Ramona months ago. He would have started banging his forehead into the wall for being such a fool if Ramona hadn't spoken up again so quickly. “Scott, I am so sorry. I have got to be the crummiest girlfriend ever for not bringing up sex first.”

“It’s okay,” Scott assured her, even though he felt like the one that really needed comforting. Grabbing onto his girl, he reached back and grabbed her butt. That got Ramona full attention as he said “I think I know how you can make it up to me.”

A very devious smirk was formed by Ms. Flowers at the thought of what her boyfriend might have thought up. Scott may have not mentioned the Big Gulp, but right now, he didn't care. He was going to make up for lost time and show Ramona that they had both been missing out on some real fun.
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