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This choice: ....Asked Ramona if she had ever tried the 'Big Gulp' | Go Back

  Chapter 15: You've heard of girls who are all mouth   (ID #981212)
    an addition by: SonicV  More by this author

“Ramona,” she was glad to hear his voice. When you sleep with someone for the first time, tell them they were good, but are then met with dead silence, it tends to worry you. She just hoped Scott was alright.

“Now that we just did it, I was kinda wondering if we could…?” he was gesturing with his hands, desperately hoping she knew what he was talking about. Ramona had a feeling he did and personally didn’t see why he was being so weird about it “Scott, if want to go again, I’m up for it.”

“Actually, that’s not it.” He said. Now Ramona was really confused. Not only was her boyfriend not asking for another romp, but she just offered him one and he turned her down?! Did he lose a couple of brain cells when he threw his head back? Fortunately, the wide eyed expression went away once she heard him speak again.

“I was wondering…if we could try…*sigh* The Big Gulp.” Scott felt silly just saying it. Even if it did seem plausible now, he still didn’t know. However, the confused look in Ramona’s eyes immediately went away as she finally understood what he was talking about “Oh, that’s what you were talking about?”

“You’ve heard of it?” Scott asked, glad to see his girlfriend smiling at what was likely to be something incredibly kinky by the sound of it. Ramona then nodded and told him “Totally dude, The Big Gulp is a huge thing, in America of course.” The smirk on her face once more implied just how boring Canadians were, an insinuation that did not go over Scott’s head. He however forgave her once she simply she said “So yeah, we can do it. I’ve never actually done it before, but we can try it together.”

Scott smiled, but on the inside, he was quickly trying to figure out just how this was going to work. He kept on picturing Ramona morphing into some sort of inhuman monster with a gaping maw or some alien slug like Jabba the Hut, revealing to him that women really are from Venus and keep men from dominating the world through the Big Gulp, just before she devoured Scott once he knew too much. Eventually, Ramona snapped her fingers in front of his face and immediately his finger in her mouth.

“What’re you-Ack!” her cries became muffled once he used his other hand to try and spread her jaw line. As she was spread painfully, the clueless boy on top of her curiously tried to figure out the best way to be inserted “So, do you just open wide or-”

“Scott!” she shoved him off, wiping the excess saliva that had flowed freely down her chin when he messed with her mouth, telling him “I’m pretty sure I’m supposed to do that.” While Scott got very quiet though, meekly saying that he only wanted to help, Ramona cleaned the spit off her, but once she smacked her lips, she tasted something. It wasn’t any of their dinner or anything, but some kind of flavor was in her mouth, the likes of which she had never had before. It was fading fast since she swallowed her spit, but she found that it tasted like meat, only better, in more ways than she could fully deduce right now. Looking at the man that was no doubt the source, Ramona got him out of his funk by trying to open wider than she ever had before.

Even despite his initial feeling on The Big Gulp, Scott was actually surprised to see Ramona struggling as her mouth didn’t seem to be getting any bigger. Ramona admitted that this was her first time, but she was also worried that she might be one of those girls who couldn’t take big gulps. Guys had been screw ups in the bedroom plenty of times, but when the girl ruins the evening, it is almost impossible for her to ever recover from that. Fortunately, that type of humiliation was not in Ramona’s future, as she gave out a startled squeak. Scott looked intently, and all he could say was “Wow.”

He couldn’t believe his own eyes, and neither could Ramona, but they were seeing the same thing. Ramona’s mouth was growing longer and wider as she forced it to. It was kind of painful for her, but she kept going, determined to make her maw as big as it could get. Her whole body shook as she groaned to keep this going, until finally she felt like she had reached her limit. Well, she had opened wide, now all she had to do was keep it open.

Scott’s wide eyes were nothing compared to what was before him. It looked like a black hole had formed right under Ramona’s nose, except it had a tongue and teeth. In some strange, VERY STRANGE kind of way, she looked like a hot version of the Sarlac Pit Monster, just with the beak. Before anything else was done, he had to ask “Are you okay?”

“I guess so.” Both of them immediately cringed once she spoke that. It was good that they could do The Big Gulp now, but it looked downright scary when Ramona spoke with mouth that gigantic. She made a not to herself not to talk with her mouth empty.
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