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Comic Vore, GTS/GT, Shrinking, Unbirth
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  Chapter 16: Scott Pilgrim Vs. The First Swallow   (ID #981249)
    an addition by: chaos  More by this author

Now that Scott saw Ramona with a gapping maw he wasn’t so sure about the whole going inside of it and down to her stomach. It looked weird and different. Weird Scott could handle, but he was still having trouble dealing with things that were different. Before his doubts could grow, he pushed them aside by remembering what Stephen had told him about it being a way to bond with your girlfriend after sex. Scott wanted to be as close to Ramona as possible, if being her midnight snack brought them closer he’d jump in without thinking twice.

“So….Do I step into your mouth?” Scott asked as he wiggled his toes and imagined pushing them into Ramona’s mouth like her maw was the opening to a bodysuit. Ramona rolled her eyes at Scott’s very uncomfortable sounding solution. She had no idea how this was supposed to go, but from the rumors she heard back when she was in New York, the girl swallows the guy by herself. She could vaguely remember one skanky ho in a New York club mentioning it was like deep throating, but without pulling back. Since you start at the head when you give a blow job, Ramona would start by eating Scott’s head.

“Sit forward and let me to the work,” she turned her back and explained, not wanting Scott to she her massive mouth moving. Doing as he was told, Scott placed his hands patiently in his lap and waited for Ramona to do this. He tried to imagine what this was going to be like, but the closet thing he could figure was that it would be like being thrown in a sack. All Ramona would do was toss him down her throat to her stomach, seemed simply enough. Crawling onto the bed in front of him, Ramona took his shoulder and leaned her hugely distended mouth towards Scott’s face. Staring into her dark, wet mouth, Scott wondered briefly if the dinner he made would be waiting for him inside of Ramona’s belly.

Moving her wide mouth over Scott’s head, he felt his face push against her tongue as she moved her lips over the crown of his head. Her lips moved down his neck until they pushed into his shoulders where she paused. As Scott stared the pinkish, wet, tooth lined insides of Ramona’s mouth, he felt her hot breath wash over him. It made him shiver as it passed his sweaty flesh. Slowly her tongue started moving against his face as Ramona started to suck on him. Her tongue slid right across his face, leaving saliva to trickle all over him. It felt strange at first, but Scott quickly got used to it, licking his lips saliva dripped down to his mouth. It was like a sloppy kiss, a very, very sloppy kiss.

Ramona moved her mouth around, suckling on Scott’s head from different angels. Her tongue moved through his hair and over his ears, tasting every inch of him. It even wormed its way into his mouth, where he sucked on it back until it pulled out. He could feel Ramona’s hands all over his chest as she rotated around him, her lips dragging over his shoulders as she moved. He was getting to enjoy this and he hoped Ramona was having some fun too. What Scott didn’t know was that as soon as Ramona had rubbed her tongue along his face, her mind had been hit by an unexplainable pleasure. It was like an orgasm in her mouth, sending a feeling of ecstasy racing from her tongue through the rest of her body. Her pussy twitched as she tasted Scott, getting aroused again from the exotic taste of flesh.

The sounds of slurping surrounded Scott as she sucked on him for several minutes before taking a loud, hard gulp. She could feel her lips expanding further as they moved over his shoulders. Her checks puffed out and the top of her throat bulged as Scott’s head sank into her esophagus. A new pleasure hit Ramona as she felt her neck being expanded. It didn’t feel as good as sex, but having her flesh stretched out gave her a rush not unlike the act of love making. Her tongue moved to his chest, tasting his finely toned muscles. Slurping and sucking, Ramona went wild with mad hunger for her lover.

Scott was surprised when he found his head pulled into Ramona’s tight, slimy throat. He could feel the moist tissue throbbing around his skull, trying to pull him down but being unable to. It was slightly claustrophobic and it started to worry Scott. This was not what he expected at all and he wondered how long until he was totally swallowed. Listening to the sound of Ramona licking at him and her heart beat he closed his eyes and wondered how becoming a meal was supposed to bring them closer.
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