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  Chapter 29: Newb   (ID #989489)
    an addition by: SonicV  More by this author

It was no dream, as Scott found out when he not only felt both of their lips on his cheeks, but when he felt Knives pinch his butt. For once, he didn’t mind the pain as a very happy smile settled on his face while he let the girls have their fun. It was too early for anything physical, but Scott didn’t care. TWO WOMEN WERE MAKING OUT WITH HIM! He had found the holy grail, the treasure that all men searched for but only a chosen few had attained. The phrases “Scott has become a player” and “Threesome Mode Unlocked” appeared in the air and things could not have been sweeter.

Knives also could say that she had never been happier in her whole life. The world finally made sense to her now, thanks to Ramona. She didn’t feel the least bit jealous that she had to share Scott with her, since she was officially his girlfriend. Also, although she couldn’t admit it as easily as them, she had fully remembered how good it felt when Ramona made her cum. She wanted to feel that again, especially if Scott gave it to her next time. Of course, Knives still had a lot to learn.

“For the last time Knives, it’s not a joystick.” Spoke an annoyed Ramona. For the past ten minutes, she had been trying to teach Scott’s new girlfriend how to give the love of their life a proper blowjob. This naturally left Knives both excited and very nervous, but Ramona at the bedside to talk her through it. Unfortunately, he friend was still so unsure of herself, that she had actually started treating the cock like she had a certain video game back when she and Scott used to hit the arcades all the time, only this time she actually lost points for jerking the stick around too hard.

“I beg to differ.” Scott joked. That not only got a small smile from Ramona, but seeing Scott smile made Knives’ nervousness wash away as she delivered the brightest of the three. She then returned to working the joy stick, only this time her hand mostly moved around it as she slowly started working her fingers all over, hoping this might be a better move. She got her answer her answer as Scott groaned, while a Pleasure Bar above his head began to fill up, making Knives determined to get the high score.

Ramona waited to see when she’d need to chime in, enjoying the show in the meantime. She had to admit, watching the cute, innocent but naughty, Chinese girl giving Scott a hand job was pretty hot. She wasn’t washing his balls or doing anything else Ramona herself would do, but Knives was a fast learner. Unfortunately, she soon became nervous again when to push the button on the stick, only to find nothing of the sort on the head.

“What do I do now?” her mind had gone completely blank. She watched as the Pleasure steadily started to go down, making her condition even worse. Thankfully, she had her friend Ramona right there by her side to reassure her “Calm down Knives, now you just need to put it in your mouth.”

That information however got a nervous squeak out of Knives as she let go of the cock and her face glowed red. Yes, this was what she wanted, but she was about to taste the meat of Scott Pilgrim, her love and long time obsession. The worst part was that Knives thought much more clearly than she did last year, meaning every possible ramification and scenario was running through her head.

“Okay, okay, it’s going to be fine, alright? Don’t think of it like that. Think of it as…a banana.” Ramona told her with her hands on her shoulders. Scott however did not share her support “What? NO! Don’t treat it like ANYTHING you can eat!” Sure, he wanted to get a blowjob as much as any guy, but he also didn’t want to be bitten down there. Ramona just rolled her eyes though, having a bit more confidence in her friend than Scott did.

“Better yet, how about you treat it like an ice cream cone?” she suggested. All of a sudden, Knives’ eyes lit up and before Scott could protest again, he felt her tongue on his meat. Knives was actually taking Ramona’s advice a bit literally, but it was working. When you get an ice cream cone, the first thing you do is lick around the rim above the cone to keep the ice cream from dripping as it melts, and she was doing the exact same thing to Scott’s rim.

The Pleasure Bar began to fill up more as the hot Asian girl licked circles around the sensitive spot. Scott started lightly panting while Knives smiled happily as she lapped. Not only was she doing good, but her boyfriend tasted even better than she ever dreamed. As her mouth began to water more, she wrapped her lips around the whole head, inciting a moan from Scott while she slurped on his popsicle. The loud and wet noise made Ramona rub her thighs together as she was just dying to join in. Knives then popped the head out of her mouth, remaining connected by a strand of saliva, before swallowing down Scott’s delectable flavor.

“Yummy!” Knives grinned. She knew she’d love Scott’s taste even before she found out about The Big Gulp. Speaking of which, she turned to the person that made this all possible “Thanks again for this Ramona, this is so incredible. Promise me we’ll get to do all that stuff you told me about; Missionary, Doggy Style, 69, The Love Seat, Mover and Shaker, Supernova, Side Wind-Her, Joystick Joyride-” Knives didn’t stop right there because of the irony, but because she suddenly pondered while three dots appeared above her head “Hey, just how much of this stuff did you do with your Evil Exes?”

Ramona’s eyes suddenly got very wide and she soon had both Knives and Scott anxiously waiting for an answer. She then grabbed Knives from the back of the head and forced her to completely swallow Scott’s dick “Time to deep throat!”

Knives tried to shout that she couldn’t breath, but Scott just gasped and groaned during the whole thing. While hi second girlfriend’s head moved up and down his shaft though, he managed to open one eye back up and upon looking at Ramona, her eyes got even wider and she proceeded to pull off Knives and just as she gasped for air, was sent flying headfirst into the wall.

“Uh Scott, don’t you have band practice soon?” Ramona asked frantically. Thankfully, he actually did and upon realizing that, he jumped out of bed and hurriedly put on his pants. Showing up late for practice was rude enough, but with a record deal hopefully in their future, Scott couldn’t afford to miss a second of practice. As his erection still bulged out of his pants, he bolted for the door with Ramona close behind him. Joining them soon would be Knives, once she fully awoke from her daze “Ice creeeeaaaaam.”
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