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  Chapter 24: Asking out a Predator   (ID #700729)
    an addition by: chaos  More by this author

Mike had been trying to muster up the courage to ask Leona out for the last two weeks, but every time he was with her there was someone else around. He wanted to ask her out when they were alone, so he did something no rabbit had done before, he went looking for a predator. Today was Tuesday, no hunting team practice and Mike remembered that Leona liked to hunt on her own every Tuesday after class. As soon as the final bell rung he went looking for her, checking all of her usual hunting grounds. She wasn’t in the field so he went to the backwoods behind the school and that’s where he found her. Walking slowly up behind her, Mike made sure to not get to close. Sneaking up on the predator, even one that you know could be very dangerous. When he saw the situation he was walking into, he had to crack a smile.

“Isn’t it usually dogs that chase cats up trees?”

In the blink of an eye, Leona spun around, claws withdrawn and looking ready to murder. The nasty snarl on her face morphed instantly into a happy smile a second later. “Mike!” she cheerfully exclaimed, Mike relaxed and smiled back. When he saw the evil look on her face before she recognized him, Mike thought he was done for. It seemed that one piece of Elanor’s advice was true; predator’s moods never remain constant. Hopefully, her other advice was true too.

“Hi Leona,” Mike waved and moved closer to the non-lethal predator. Standing next to Leona, his eyes went up to her catch. “Not you’re usual prey, trying something new?”

In the branches above their heads, a large Doberman growled at Mike. “Shut it Rabbit! Why don’t you eat him cat and leave me alone, I ain’t prey! You should be eating dumb, weak rabbits like that guy!”

“Shut up!” Leona snarled, her mood returning to malicious. Her eyes narrowed on the dog holding on for dear life above her, bearing her fangs, she uttered a few words that both made Mike blissful and petrified. “Mike is not dumb or weak, he’s tougher then any dirty dog! You say anything like that again and I’ll slice you up, feed you to my teammates and mail whatever is left to your family.”

That shut the dog up and made Mike gulp nervously. This kind of behavior wasn’t strange for Leona and if what Elanor told him was true, it wasn’t strange for any predator. String emotions were a must in the animal kingdom. A good predator could be laughing and joking with their friends one second and then spot a meal and becoming bloodthirsty killers. It was common in all predators and Elanor had made it clear to Mike two weeks ago that if he couldn’t accept the beast in Elanor as well as the cheerful girl, he had better not even dream of dating her. The funny thing was that although scared, Mike found the more brutal side of Leona just as amazing as her other half. A girl that could be as sweet as candy and as tough as nails seemed like a perfect combination to Mike.

“Thanks Leona, not many people would stick up for me.” It was true, out of everyone Mike knew only Leona and maybe Leona would say anything to someone that insulted him. His prey teammates would be too afraid, his predator teammates wouldn’t care enough to say anything and his family, well, they would just run and hide.

“Forget it, what are friends for,” Leona scoffed bashfully. Her paw came down on Mike’s shoulder, lightly resting on her furry arm. Realizing how close she was to Mike, Leona pulled her paw back quickly before Mike could interpret what she was doing. Hoping to make him forget what she’d done, Leona moved onto something else. “If your wondering why I’m chasing after this freshman dog, it because coach suggested I try tracking down omnivore species. Chasing after the prey team has given me an edge in hunting smaller, less feisty prey, but I still suck at taking down the bigger guys. I figured chasing Fido up there would be good practice. Now if I could only get him down and finish my hunt. I’m not leaving until he’s inside my belly.”

Leona licked her lips, imaging the taste of dog once she got the freshman down. Most predators only hunted prey species, but Leona was a lioness, a breed known notoriously for taking down tougher prey. Elanor had explained how Lioness’s think to Mike, with hopes the information would help him. Lionesses were some of the toughest predators in the world, mostly because they were expected to bring in the daily meat for their whole family. Male lions don’t hunt, leaving all the hunting to the females. After centuries of doing all the work, Lionesses had hunting in their genes. Hunting down twice as much as most other species made Lionesses some of the most deadly predators on earth. And Mike had fallen for one.

“I find it hard to believe that you suck at anything,” Mike commented softly. “You’re one of the best natural hunters I’ve ever met.”

A blush crept onto Leona’s face and coyly she looked away. “Come on, you’re just saying that.”

“No, I’m serious. The whole predator team has chased me down at least once and not even the captains have as much grace and speed as you do. Take it from a species that frets over every predator in the world, you’re the best.”

“Wow,” Leona tautly murmured. A huge toothy grin overtook her whole face as she revealed in the praise. Leona always thought she was good, maybe not the best, but hearing it from Mike felt a hundred times better then it did saying it in the mirror. Hunting was a big part of Leona’s life and she was planning on still hunting when her fur was grey. Mike’s opinion meant a lot more to her then she thought it would. It wasn’t just the fact that he was prey that made her feel good, it was the fact that it was coming from such a kind and fun male. Knowing that he respected her felt better then hunting down any prey that Leona could remember.

“It’s true,” Mike reassured her. Taking a deep breath, Mike mustered up all his courage. Now was the time. He wasn’t going to get a better chance to ask Leona out. He’d just say it and see what happened. The worst that could happen is that she eat him.

“Hey Leona, how about we ditch the mutt and go grab something that tastes better. I know this great little burger joint that serves the best mouse burger ever, or at least that’s what I’ve heard.”

“You mean together, alone, like on a date?” Leona asked slowly, narrowing her eyes at Mike.

“Yes. I’m asking you out on a date. How about it?”





“YES!”

Rudy grit his teeth to prevent another outburst. There was no one in the tree house, but that didn’t mean he felt comfortable hollering to high hell. It was rare for Rudy to find himself alone at home, what with his step-father working there and his grandmother living with the family. Alone time was rare in the Dewclaw home, so Rudy was using the time free from his family to have a little fun with his girlfriend and right now the person he loved more then God himself.

Rudy’s tongue hung limply from his muzzle, flapping back and forth as he panted heavily. He was seated on the edge of his bed, pants tossed aside and legs spread so Fiona could do her stuff. Being with Fiona was great, she had everything, wealth, beauty, fantastic personality and a knack for hunting. Being with her was always enjoyable for Rudy. Everything from hunting to holding paws was fun if it was with Fiona. They felt comfortable doing anything together, including getting very intimate.
Between Rudy’s legs, Fiona kneeled, her top removed, allowing Rudy to look at her furry breasts. However, his eyes were drawn not to her bear chest, but at her mouth, which was wrapped around his wolfhood. Rudy moaned as he felt the warmth and moistness of the inside of Fiona’s mouth trace along his entire shaft. Closing his eyes and moaning in bliss, Rudy savored Fiona’s hot, wet mouth as it worked on his shaft. Fiona ran her tongue up the backside of his dick, tracing some of the prominent veins that ran there. She then flattened her tongue against the head of his cock and worked her way down the other side. She came back up and slowly began taking in his length. As she worked, a soft humming sound came from Fiona’s throat, vibrating Rudy’s cock to further please him.

“I love you! I love you! I love you!” Rudy cried out as Fiona’s entire muzzle covered his hard cock. He could feel the tip of his prick ease into her throat. Deep throating was easy for predators, fitting a few inch thick member into your throat is easy compared to stretching it around the waist of a deer. Even still, the added tightness of Fiona’s throat drove Rudy wild. A loud growl issued from Rudy as his alpha male instincts took hold. His paws came down, grabbing Fiona by the side of the head as she pulled up. Growling, Rudy forced her head back down, pushing her snout into his pubic hair. Fiona gave a muffled response, but didn’t try to stop Rudy. It was his instincts taking over, turning him into a more aggressive male. It bothered Fiona slightly, but she didn’t take it personally. She’d just have to have him make it up to her when it was his turn to go down on her.
Bobbing up and down on Rudy’s cock, now moving much faster thanks to her boyfriends unwanted assistance, Fiona could sense Rudy wasn’t going to last much longer. Rudy’s panting grew louder and his grip on Fiona’s head lessened, he still hand his paw on the side of her head, but he was no longer forcing her to go down. Without Rudy holding her down, Fiona was able to pull her mouth off his prick. Out in the cold air, Rudy’s cock throbbed, but before it could get cold, Fiona wrapped her paw around it and started pumping.

Her fingers worked the shaft, positioning the head strait towards her open muzzle. Rudy gave a final howl, sinking his claws into his bed sheets and came heavily. The first spout of cum landed on Fiona’s tongue and was quickly followed by another and another. Fiona tried to catch it all in her mouth, letting it build up on her tongue, but she missed a few times and ended up getting cum on her cheek, chin and running down her furry chest. Basking in the warm, salty flavor, she swallowed it all in one gulp, filling her belly with the warm, fuzzy feeling she only got from eating this kind of meat.

Gasping, sweaty and worn out, Rudy looked down at Fiona as she kept her paw wrapped around his semi-hard cock. “You are the best girlfriend… Ever!”

Giggling, Fiona didn’t say anything back. What was there to say? She was the one that offered to go down on him.

Not quite done yet, Fiona moved to start licking and sucking on Rudy’s sensitive balls, making him start moaning again and start to return life to his recently exercise cock. She rolled them around in her mouth and sucked on them like candy. She then popped them out of her mouth and looked up at Rudy with a wolfish grin. Rudy caught the implication behind her smile and nearly whooped for joy. Fiona was still horny and she wanted to have more fun. It seemed like lately she was like this, never satisfied and always wanting more. She pinched and groped Rudy’s butt whenever she had the chance and on more then one occasion had dragged him between classes for a quickie in the utilities closet. She wasn’t in heat, Rudy would have smelt it. But whatever the reason for her newfound libido was, Rudy wanted to thank it personally.

RING RING

Groaning in annoyance, Rudy tried to ignore his cell phone. He had better things to do then answer the phone, but it continued to ring. Unmoved from her spot between his legs, Fiona looked up at him questioningly. “Aren’t you going to get it?”

“Okay,” Rudy grumbled and grabbed his phone off his beside cabinet. Checking to see who was calling, he recognized the number belonging to Leona. Cursing the day he had given his phone number to all the members of the hunting team, he flipped it open and started talking.

“HeLLLLOOOOO!”

The last part came out as a wail because something wet and soft had run down the side of his shaft. Glaring down between his legs, Fiona innocently looked up, her tongue still sticking out. Focusing back on the call, Rudy tried to get rid of Leona quickly before Fiona tried to deep throat him in the middle of the conversation.

“Sorry, bad connection, what can I do for you… Okay, do whatever you want… Really, I don’t care…. Bye.”

Closing his cell, Rudy got back to what mattered, the honey she-fox between his thighs begging for his cock. Lightly playing with his furry balls, Fiona asked one last thing before she began.

“So, what did Leona want?”

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