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The Super Kids from Xavalia
Two preteens from planet Xavalia come to Earth and discover they have super powers here!
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This is an interactive story containing 3 chapters. Each chapter tells part of the story and (usually) ends with multiple choices. Click on a choice and you'll be lead to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, you will have the option to write it! Don't be shy... make an addition!
About This Interactive
The owner of this Interactive Story begins with this information and guidance:
Planet Xavalia is invaded by pirates and one lucky couple has decided to allow their children to escape at the last minute by letting them flee in a space ship, which had been built and stored in a secret building on the planet.

The children were placed in suspended animation so they wouldn't age or die as the space ship was launched from the planet as the parents were captured and later killed by the invaders.

The small spaceship was sent to Earth with the hope that the children would be able to live a normal life there, far away from the dangerous pirates who had conquered their people and their planet.

Unknown to everyone, these children would arrive on earth and wake up shortly after landing there. They would soon discover that Earth's yellow sun would cause the Xavalian children to possess superhuman strength, speed, and other incredible powers as well.

These children are soon discovered by a loving couple and raised by them. They use their powers for good. They may decide to become super heroes, or not.

The two children are a boy and a girl: Patrick, who is 8 years old, and Karen, who is 6 years old. After they land and emerge from the ship, they discover that they have super strength, they're invulnerable, they have super speed, and they can fly. They also have all the super senses, like super hearing, x-ray vision, heat vision, and super breath.

The kids are completely omnipotent on earth and have no weaknesses at all. Luckily, they aren't evil. On the contrary, they're shy, timid and curious and very helpful. They are willing to help anyone they meet, and who is willing to help them for they are homeless and have no place to stay.

Please: No killing, no sex, and no foil language permitted. I will award GP's for good additions, and I will delete short, one-liners, and poor chapters.

NOTE: Before knocking my story down with a horrible rating, please allow me to expand it with a few chapters, okay? GIVE IT A CHANCE! Therefore, I am NOT allowing any ratings at this time. Some IDIOT rated it one star on the FIRST DAY that I created this, which is very discouraging!!!! Any bad reviews will be reported to the writing.com staff as well so don't even bother.

Sorry about my last rant but I'm kinda pissed about the bad reception this story received on the first day.

Anyway, please ADD to the story if you feel like you want to contribute. 1,000 GP's awarded for good chapters! One-liners will be deleted.

Thanks and have fun!

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