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The Legendary Chakira Clan
Like Warriors Cats, this is a clan except very new fan-made characters and new adventures
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  Chapter 5: Lead a patrol   (ID #697868)
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I might as well get a patrol in case..

Firestar looks up at the moon, she wonders about the clan meeting? What else is there to worry about other than twolegs and invaders? Nah.. it couldn't be. She nods up and walks down to her den "Flameheart?"

"Need something?" A Flame colored tom with violet eyes stands up and stretches; Firestar's mate.

" I need some available Warriors.. I'm gonna lead a patrol tonight"

* * * *
Along with Foxdeath, Lonewolf, and Dawnpaw, Firestar lead the patrol along their bolder making sure none shows up and used their stench to pin in their territory. Dawnpaw's fur was as muddy as it was since the training program she was instructed. Her colored markings seemed dazed now.

" Why we doing a patrol this late at night?"

Lonewolf's Question was about to be asked by Firestar as well, but she's a leader; she made the decision

"I get worried alot, you know how some leaders are."

" That can explain it?"

"Why?" Firestar's head turned to Dawnpaw, who was looking to the opposite direction. " I see some cat.. he looks scary.."

" Chakiraclan!" Foxdeath hissed.

Firestar didn't blame Foxdeath's hatred for them. They were also called "Starclan's apprentice" since they're members looked strangely and can talk to humans without no doubt of annoyance; twolegs can be scared easily.

" Just stay back.. this one's not gonna be easy to handle" Firestar gulped as she ordered the rest to back up. She looked right to left, up and down, side to side. This one's slippery and sneaky.

"Can't wait til the meeting comes up" Lonewolf stared away, snickering

" It could be just a rogue.." Foxdeath glared at Lonewolf

Firestar got annoyed but kept her cool. Then she sniffed again.

....

.......

.............

" Those cats is stupid.." Firestar mumbled. The three clan cats raised a brow

" It's just some apprentice.. and He smelt like a dangerous warrior."

Dawnpaw almost laughed her head off but kept it shut, Foxdeath wanted to facepalm himself (facepalm means like hitting ur face with ur head; u usually do it when something stupid happens)

Firestar then lead the patrol to the smell; keep sniffing until they got to the lake; the kit was there alright. Yellow furred and drinking out of the cool waters.

" HEY YOU!!!!!"

The kit jumped up from surprisement and stopped what it was doing.

" What you doing in our territory?!"

" I..kinda.. got lost"

" WHAT U MEAN YOU GOT LOST?!"

Firestar's little anger still made it jump. "I was ordered to find some of our clan members, but they were so far away i had to get some energy; I'm sorry!"

Dawnpaw glared at Foxdeath. " Is it me or is he being a idiot?"

" Chakiraclan has a pod of idiots"

" WATCH WHAT U ARE SPEAKING TO!"

Firestar's little anger made three of them jump; even though Lonewolf didn't do anything

" You do realize that your clan leader needs to know what your doing."

the yellow kit nods.

"Name?" Firestar questioned the kit; more of an order

" YellowPaw.."

" Your mother sure will be pissed" DawnPaw informed him.

"I don't have a mother; she died of greencough."

Dawnpaw's jaw fell to the ground; How can they die of Greencough?!

The yellow tom licked his fur, like nothing bad will happen.

" Take him to our clan; it'll be awhile. You know how Silverstar can be."

Dawnpaw tipped her head at Yellowpaw; he didn't seem so bad

Lonewolf glared at Foxdeath. "Like i said.. we still have the deal"

"yeah yeah.." Foxdeath made Yellowpaw follow him, then the chakiraclan cat turned back to the others
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