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Turned into a shoe!
You find a device and are accidentally turned into a shoe!
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This choice: The birthday party of her friend Demi, who just turned 17 | Go Back

  Chapter 5: Lift   (ID #795950)
    an addition by: teniko  More by this author

(Mn... glad to see the story picked up ^^ Also glad you likeed my old chapter)

"Val!" You yelled up as you watched her sock smother you once more. You felt her move pressure to the ball of her foot before launching you into the air with a kick lick motion. Her insole was slowly getting damper as she wandered towards the car with the smile of a daydreamer. You tried your yell once more as she smothered you once more. No mouth to make actuall sound, but with the pressure and the great swing of Vals legs, you didn't care.

"Hurry up Mia!" Val yelled, grinding her steps to a halt. Her hair swayed in the gental breeze as she stood on her brother, blissfully unaware of his cry's as she changed weight from one fot to another. Her ears twitched with glea to the sound of cracking pebbles beneath her sole.
"Why can't Mum take you?" Mia sneered as she stormed out of the house, key twitching in hand.
"Because she's in work..." Val spoke slowly as she grinned her trademark, goofy grin.
"Still... she could of dropped you off before work..." Mia retaliated as she wandred towards the car. "Did Bro head out?" Mia asked as she unlocked the ar door.
"Na, would of heard him... probably in the toilet" Val spoke with a smile as she swung the car door open and got in.

You waited in silence as Val absentmindedly bobbed you up and down for the car ride. Her thin grey sock scrunched now and again as she clicked her toes. The drone of chatter slowly carried on as you waited for your 15 minutes to be up.
"That's got to be 15 minutes..." You muttered "Unless I can't turn back when in use... perhaps the timer is for when your not in use... has the timer been paused?" Questions floated around in your head as Val twitched her fot yet again. You felt a part of you get puched down slightly as she scratched her leg. You looked up as her. She didn't even look down at you.

"I'm just a shoe..." You muttered

"Thanks Mia" Val spoke happily as she jumped from the car. A small squelch that was so tiny, no-one heard, came from under her foot.
"No prob... if you need me, I'll be in the shoe shop down the road." Mia spoke with a smile as Val wanderd away with a wave.

"Ew..." You muttered, as Val moved suddenly. You felt gravity slowly vanish benith you for a second before Val's foot squelched into her damp insole. "Val..." You muttered as she wigged her toes to get the circulation flowing again. "Gross... This isn't even that sweaty... please say that her party isn't a dance part... please say it isn't a.." You changed your view as Val released pressure for anther step.
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