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To Be A God
Rachel wakes up on an island and finds intelligent insects that worship her as a goddess!
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This is an interactive story containing 162 chapters. Each chapter tells part of the story and (usually) ends with multiple choices. Click on a choice and you'll be lead to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, you will have the option to write it! Don't be shy... make an addition!
About This Interactive
The owner of this Interactive Story begins with this information and guidance:
Story:
Rachel lives with her parents on a sailing boat. However, after a terrible storm throws her overboard, she wakes up on the shores of an unknown island. While she tries to survive on the desert island, she is unaware the island is inhabited by other creatures; intelligent insects called Kikoki. Roughly half an inch tall (about the size of her smallest toe), they resemble small crickets or beetles and stand on their hind legs. They have reached an evolutionary stage of living in tribes and believe in religion over science. As such, when Rachel finds them, they praise her as a goddess! How she will react is up to you...

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Characters:
Rachel - 14 years old. Has blue eyes and blonde hair, wears a red tank-top, blue jeans and brown sandals. Slender and tall, wears a necklace and carries a small bag with her.
Kikoki described in Story.

Rules:
-Keep things clean. Don't stray into sex and vulgar stuff like that.
-Stuff to do with feet or vore is fine, but don't go too far.
-No toilet stuff. That's just sick.
-Worship is fine, it's not sacrilegious in the sense.
-Foot odour detail is alright, but don't push it.
-Killing the Kikoki is fine, both accidental and intentional.
-Kikoki speak English they learnt from a previous 'god' that came to the island.
-The story can be ended and Rachel IS allowed to die.
-You can use the POV of a Kikoki. If it dies, either switch to Rachel or another Kikoki.
-Rachel doesn't have to be the only person on the island.
-How Rachel acts is up to you.

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Morals:
In most chapters (mainly the ones asking how Rachel will act as a goddess), you may notice brackets saying whether it makes her good, neutral or evil.
GOOD - Rachel will be a kind and gentle goddess, caring for the Kikoki. She will protect them from threats, listen to their problems and they will probably repay her with food, water and other gifts. Rachel may also be friendly with certain Kikokis and take care of them in return.
NEUTRAL - Rachel will be an authoritative and judgmental goddess, acting as a force of law. She will honour those that do good and punish those that do bad. She will usually ask for forms of worship, from provisions like food and water, to trivial things like statues and festivals in her name, to the personal like foot rubs and personal groomers.
EVIL - Rachel will be powerful and dominant and usually thinks of Kikokis as just talking bugs. She will act as a force of destruction, from destroying buildings to killing Kikokis in many elaborate ways (crushing them, swallowing them, etc). She may also ask for sacrifices and such in exchange for her to stop going on a rampage.

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Endings:
Official endings (the ones by me) will having a rating system at the end. It will determine how you acted up to that point. For example, if you made a lot of GOOD options, the ending will reflect this and you will receive a rank to determine this.
Ranks are as follows:

Benevolent One - Every choice was a GOOD choice.
Caring Guardian - Every choice was either GOOD or NEUTRAL, majority being GOOD.
Merciful Leader - Every choice was either GOOD or NEUTRAL, majority being NEUTRAL.
Great Judge - Every choice was a NEUTRAL choice.
Strict Authority - Every choice was either EVIL or NEUTRAL, majority being NEUTRAL.
Vengeful Force - Every choice was either EVIL or NEUTRAL, majority being EVIL.
Destructive One - Every choice was a EVIL choice.

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Featured Writers:
flakyhtf - First contributor and contributor with many great chapters. Top notch.
Luigi P - Helped attract attention to the interactive through his forum. Thankies.

Featured Chapters:
Tribulation by flakyhtf - This one is very emotive and powerful. I nearly started crying, man. This one focuses on one Kikoki mourning her brother's death. ;_;
Rachel and Narina bond by flakyhtf - Another good chapter from him. This one is uplifting and pretty interesting to read, especially with the contrast between Rachel and Narina.

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Other Interactives:

Less of a Human
http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1490075/
Tara accidentally clones herself, but her clone is quite smaller than the original...

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Enjoy, hopefully, m'yes, quite, indeed?
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