The Smell of Her Feet
        by Mr. Cool  (tuxedoman@Writing.Com)
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  Chapter 8: Sucking my toes?"   (ID #785114)
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"Wait what!?!?" You yell out of pure shock. "I'm so sorry. I was just so hopeful because I knew it would feel amazing and since you were down there and sniffing my feet I thought you had enough of a tolerance of feet to do it." She says while crying a little. Feeling guilt coming over you for causing such a beautiful girl to cry you uncontrollably say "I'm sorry for that outburst earlier. If you really want me to suck your toes, then I will do it for you." "Really!?" Orihime exclaims out of excitement. "Yeah but only because I like you. I definitely don't like feet," You say to make things clear. "Yay! Alright open wide," she says while playfully poking your lips with her toes. You open your mouth slowly (due to the fact that you are not enjoying yourself and right as you do she gently shoves her toes into your mouth. The taste of her feet ,that are somehow still sweaty even after several hours of being at them, hits you immediately and almost makes you want to hurl. "Well since you can't really respond I will just tell you what to do from here," she giggles. You still can't believe this is happening. "Alright now I want you to swirl your tongue around and in-between my toes. By the way, since I enjoyed you sniffing my feet before you can go ahead and sniff my feet," she says with that same playful giggle. Right after she says this her other foot is put over your nose for reasons that should be obvious. You start to do as your told and you get an immediate reaction of her moaning out of immense pleasure. "Ohhhh yeeeesssss don't stop!!!" The taste of her sweat and feet is overwhelming but oddly enough you can take it. That is probably because she is enjoying it so much just like earlier. This continues for about 30 minutes until she removes her left foot (sorry for not specifying earlier) and replaces it with her right foot for the same treatment as before. After another 30 minutes she decides change it up. "Alright now it's time you...
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