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Deal With the Devil
Make a deal with the devil, but watch out, you may just get what you wished for.
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Only For: 18 and Older, Not Easily Offended
This choice: You look for your room | Go Back

  Chapter 3: You look for your room   (ID #624734)
    an addition by: Mandi  More by this author

You are horrified at the position you are in, and you blindly hurry down a hall, following all of the other girls. There are many closed doors, and you watch each of the girls disappear into the various rooms. The you notice that there is a name on each of the doors. Finally you find one that says "Consuela" and you go in. You leave the door ajar behind you. There is a full length mirror, and for the first time you see what you look like. You are a stunning Hispanic woman with cole black hair. You have a perfect body, with a slim waist, wide hips and well endowed on top. Your face is arrestingly beautiful, more beautiful than any woman you have ever seen.

The young man enters the room behind you, somewhat out of breath. "Wow, I guess you're as anxious to get started as I am." He grabs your butt with both hands. You turn and slap him across the face. "Damn," he says. "You're a hot-blooded Latina. So much the better."

You are about to slap him again when the madame peeks in. "Consuela, can I see you outside for a moment?"

"Gladly," you say, and leave the room.

"What the hell's wrong with you," she says. "Guys pay to come here to have sex, not to get slapped around."

"He grabbed my butt," you say.

"He's paying to grab your butt, dear. You don't have to like it, but you sure as hell better pretend to like it. I'm not losing business over you, Consuela. You hear me?"

"Well too bad, because I quit!"

"You can't quit, Consuela," she says. "Once you're here, there's no way out. Not until your debt gets paid off, and you're not even close."

You wish you could go back. If only you could have another wish.

"You just got here," she says. "I'm starting to get offended that you don't like the wish I granted for you."

You stare at her.

"Yes, Consuela, I'm the one who granted your wish." She changes back to the woman who picked you up in the bar for a second, and then back to the madame.

"You tricked me!" you say. "I never asked for this!"

"But dear, you did ask for this. You said you wanted to be irresistable to the opposite sex, and so you are. There is a handsome young man waiting in your room who wants you. He wants you bad. And there will be so many others who will soon be beating down your door. You will be the most popular whore here. I promise you."

"But..."

"But what? You never specified which sex you would be or would be irresistable to you, so consider that my special gift to you. Just think, you get to experience life as a woman, and a really attractive woman at that."

"But I don't want to be a woman!" you say.

"Why not? You know, sex is so much better as a female. Their orgasm can go on longer than a male's, and in that body you are going to get so much sex. Why don't you just give it a try? You might like it."

You frown menacingly at her.

"Or, you can purchase a new wish from me. From now on you have to purchase any new wishes, as you only get one freebee."

"What is the cost?"

"Just a portion of your soul. A small portion, that's all."

"How can that be? How can I give up just a portion of my soul?"

"Oh, it's easy, but hard to explain. Much too complicated for a human to understand."

You think for a moment.

"Well, I don't have all day, and that young man in your room is getting anxious. What is your decision?"
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