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Down the Hatch: Out the Egress
Remake of Down the Hatch. Will you eat others or will you be eaten yourself?
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  Chapter 5: Kate Versus Nancy   (ID #1277988)
    an addition by: BradRepko  More by this author

"That's good to know. I was wondering what I was going to do with you; but it seems the black wings don't approve of your existence." your mother's voice suddenly appears from behind Kate as she stands in the doorway. "This works out great for my family. If we take care of you and your mother, the black wing will be indebted to us. This works out nicely for both families, don't you agree?" Your mother says with a cruel smile. Your mother has always been a powerful and scary woman, but hearing her talk like this about your best friend makes your heart ache.

Kate just smiles, not even turning to face your mother. "You're welcome to try, Mrs. B., but I have the abilities of both the white and black wing families. The size witches may be strong, but they aren't at the level of either wing families, and my powers haven't diminished despite the mixing of the bloods. In fact, the white and black wing powers are both very compatible." Kate addresses your mother in a polite but stand-offish manner. Is Kate really that powerful? "Besides, my powers aren't what you need to be worrying about. Mary's powers are just starting to awaken, and are still very unstable. If you were to devour me, she could lose control of her emotions and unleash her powers accidentally." Kate warns.

Your mother laughs heartily. "Are you telling me I should be afraid of my own daughter?" she asks incredulously. "Don't make me laugh! It doesn't matter how strong her powers are, I have over thirty years experience using my powers. If she makes a move, she'll meet the same fate as you." your mother taunts. The color on your face drains immediately. Stacy wasn't lying, your mother really would eat you. Hearing that makes you want to cry. Your sister places her hand on your shoulder to comfort you, it seems she sympathizes with you.

"Oh, I have no doubt you'd be able to overwhelm Mary, but that's not the problem." Kate replies, looking straight at you. "Unlike you, I know what Mary's power is. I've known all along. That was one of the reasons I've always looked after her." she flashes you a warm smile, and it somehow relieves your tension and makes you feel at ease. Both Kate and her mother have always been able to to that with their smiles. Is that an ability of the white wing clan? "Mary has the giantess power, and while she won't be able to hold it for long; it'll be just enough that every person within five miles will see her. The combined effort of every vore clan on earth wouldn't be able to cover that up. People will inquire about the incredible growing girl, and uncover the truth about the vore clans. Once they do, there will be large scale war; and then centuries of planning and subterfuge will be ruined." Kate says.

Both your sister and your mother look at you with eyes wide open. What did Kate mean, is she saying you can grow into a giant? "You're bluffing. The giantess ability hasn't been seen since the founding of our clan. Even if she is my daughter, there is just no way she could have the founder's ability." your mother states matter-of-factly. No way, the founder's ability. Is your ability really that powerful?

Kate finally turns around, looking straight at your mother. "It doesn't matter if you believe me or not. You're not going to be able to beat me, so that situation is at no risk of happening anyway." Kate says in certain matter. Your mother has always been incredibly strong, and that was without her powers. Is Kate's power really so amazing that she can be completely fearless in the face of your mother.

Angry at Kate's boastfulness, your mother's body starts to bulk up. She starts getting taller, and her muscles begin to bulge even further than you've ever seen. Stacy's grip on your shoulder becomes incredibly tight, and she breaks into a cold sweat. It seems she has seen this form before, and it must have been a traumatic experience. Your mother stops her growth at nearly ten feet tall, and the comparison to the Hulk isn't entirely accurate. She's incredibly beautiful even in this form, although her muscles are so massive. Even her breasts have grown, becoming massive mounds of tit flesh. "I'm tired of your mouth, bitch. It's time I stuff you into mine." your mother shouts, and charges towards Kate.

Your mother gets within a foot of Kate, and then suddenly stops. A look of both fear and submissiveness spread across her face. "On your knees." Kate commands, and to both your Stacy's amazement, your mother obeys. "The black wing our known for being able to strike fear into people with just a look from their eyes. They call this ability the Eyes of Fear. The white wing our able to create a feeling of relaxation and security from just a gaze. They call this ability the Eyes of Harmony. I'm able to combine both of these abilities into one. I call this ability the Eyes of Submission. I'm able to compel anyone to obey me with just a glance." she explains. "Now, you have hurt Mary's feeling and caused her a lot of pain. I want to apologize to her." Kate tells your mother in a harsh tone.

Nancy looks up right into your eyes and says in the most sincere tone. "I'm sorry Mary. I'm sorry. Everything I've done is for the good of the family." she says, sounding like she is on the verge of tears. Even if she is being forced by Kate, it sounds like she means it. However, Kate seems extremely offended by your mother's words. Lifting her hand, she smacks your mother across the face.

"That's merely an excuse, not a justification. Everything the black wing did to my family was justified as being for the good of the family. What a load of crap." Kate yells angrily. "What you have done is no different than them. It wasn't to protect your family and your secret. Everything is done for the sake of making a world where vores rule over humans like they were cattle." Kate scolds. "If you really care about your family, you'd find a way to preserve your secret and keep your family members safe." It's clear that Kate is still very damaged from her past. She's never even told you any of this, shouldering this burden alone. "I'll let you live, however. I wouldn't want to make Mary and her sisters orphans. You can spend the rest of your life making it up to them as your repentance." Kate tells your mother.

With your mother bowing before Kate, helpless under the affect of her Eyes of Submission, what happens next?
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