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Down the Hatch: Out the Egress
Remake of Down the Hatch. Will you eat others or will you be eaten yourself?
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  Chapter 5: Down Goes Susan   (ID #1173118)
    an addition by: BradRepko  More by this author

As you open your mouth wide, you hear a familiar voice from behind you. "Oh boy! Is Mary going to eat Kate?" comes Susan's voice from behind you; the door still open from when you barged in. The girl giggles, she's never gotten along with Kate. In fact, the two of you have never really gotten along either. Her entire life has been like a deliberate attempt to try and annoy you. All the times she's barged in on you with her friends; the time she snuck into your room to use your computer and left the webcam on, resulting in videos of you in your underwear getting disseminated around the whole school. Kate is more than a best friend to you, while this little brat has been nothing but a thorn in your side since the day she was born.

Turning around to face Suzy, you suddenly launch yourself at her. Susan's eyes grow wide, but before she has the time to raise her arms in defense or even let out a scream of terror, she finds herself up to her belly within your throat. You don't waste any time, and tilt your head throat, causing her to sink in up to her hips due to the force of gravity. Her legs are kicking wildly in terror, but that doesn't slow you down one bit. With a long gulp, her legs slide down your throat, her wiggling feet disappearing between your lips as you close them. Little Susan slides down into your belly, making a rather large bulge in your stomach. You smile and turn back around, patting your engorged belly, at last truly satisfied. Susan is kicking up a storm inside of you, and while it feels good, it's also giving you the need to...

BUUUUUURRRRRP!

The loud belch echoes through the house, making the furniture in your mom's room rattle with the intensity of it. Both your mom and Kate look surprised at what you've just done, but Kate's face quickly turns to a grin. "Good work, greedy guts!" Kate compliments, making you beam with pride. Of course, your mom doesn't look as pleased by this development, but she's still trying to figure out how to respond. You don't think you've ever seen your mom speechless before, she's always been so agile minded.

"Let me out of here!" Susan suddenly calls out from within your belly. "Mom, make Mary cough me up!" she cries out, her kicking making little protrusions in your belly. You can't help but giggle, her movements feel good, and all she's succeeding in doing is stimulating your stomach, which suddenly lets out an ominous gurgle. "Ahhhhhh! Hurry and let me out! It's starting to tingle in here!"

Your mother finally seems to have come to a decision. Stepping around Kate, she walks over to you, her arms folded beneath her gigantic boobs. "So you'd rather eat your own sister rather than Kate?" your mother asks with a stern tone in her voice.

A drop of sweat drips down your brow. Your mother has always been an intimidating women, but you've never been as afraid of her as you are at this moment. "I love Kate, but Susan had it coming. Besides, she'd have eaten me if she had the chance... probably." you tell your mother. Susan stops squirming around for a moment. She had been making plans on eating you just last night with her friend Lindsey. Of course, that plotting made her hungry and she'd eaten Lindsey instead, In fact, she'd just come from the bathroom after having disposed of little Lindsey when she saw you about to devour Kate. While you are too busy looking at your mother to notice, your mom certainly notices the sudden lack of frantic squirming in your belly.

"You've stopped squirming, Susan. I take it you were planning on eating your sister." she asks, staring down at the bulge in your belly. You suddenly look down at your belly, awaiting to hear her response.

"Y..yes mommy. I was planning on having Lindsey help me, but I got so hungry I wound up eating her instead." Susan replies after a moment.

That bitch! In your anger, your belly gets even more active, and Susan let's out another scream as your acids rain down on her. Her frantic squirming has resumed as well. Your mom stares at this for a moment, and then says...
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