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Shrunk at the Video Music Award's!
You get shrunk backstage at a concert or in a bands tour bus
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This choice: Hayley's milkshake | Go Back

  Chapter 12: Milk Shakin-Up   (ID #1210064)
    an addition by: Blood  More by this author

The thick liquid you were suspended in chilled you to the bone. Looking up, you watched as Hayley’s scarlet tongue brushed past her lips. You had ended up in Hayley’s milkshake, and blended in perfectly with the creamy white surroundings.

“Mmmmm, this looks yummy!” Hayley said as she brought you close to her warm mouth.

“Hayley, look down! I’m in here! It’s me, Julie!” you shout as Hayley’s luscious lips come closer and closer to your tiny form.

Hayley’s hot breath washes over you as she parts her lips, exhaling. Suddenly, Hayley’s scarlet tongue snaked out of her mouth, and came down on you! You screamed as the warm, sticky snake created a crater behind you as it licked up a large tongue-full of whipped cream. Watching breathlessly, you couldn’t even move as you saw a mountain of cream four times your height disappear into the scarlet singer’s dark mouth.

“MMMMMMM!” Hayley moaned as you saw her eyes close happily.

GULP!

You watched as a large bulge sank into Hayley’s throat. Suddenly this whole experience became a lot less exciting and a whole lot more frightening! You tried to run, but found yourself trapped knee deep in whipped cream, totally immobilized. A wind of hot air washed over you as you tried pulling your legs free. Looking up slowly, you saw the scarlet beast now digging in before you, and soon you found yourself lifted up high as Hayley’s tongue scooped you out for its next treat!

Her teeth clicked shut behind you as Hayley’s lips sealed out the rest of the light. You were soon tumbling head over heels as Hayley’s tongue tossed you around her mouth, mashing up the pile of whipped cream into a lukewarm soup.

“Hayley! Let me out of here!” you screamed as you thrashed around on her tongue like a crazed psycho. Suddenly, everything stood still for a few seconds. You held your breath as….

<!--[if !supportLists]-->1.) <!--[endif]-->Hayley spat you out! She could have sworn she felt something moving in her mouth

<!--[if !supportLists]-->2.) <!--[endif]-->Hayley swallows! Down to her stomach you go!


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