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The Prisoner
A young slave encounters another prisoner in the castle that isn't human!
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  Chapter 79: Unexpected Help   (ID #963390)
    an addition by: Bruce Lee Gifford Jr.  More by this author

Hanging upside down on the branch above the web, was a giant female naga. She had caught Felix and he was in her fist. This worried Felix and Fakira because they had heard stories of how nagas never passed up an opportunity to eat a human. The naga swung around so that she stood on top of the branch with her emerald green tall with irregular white stripes with pale yellow underbelly wrapped around the branch. This caused Felix to be upside down in her hand, but she quickly deposited him onto the open palm of the other hand.

Felix fell into the giant hand of the female naga that seemed to be over 70 feet tall from the ground up (she was 73 feet tall to be exact) and he cowered in the hand. He was quickly lifted to a very large and beautiful face. The naga was very cute with freckles dotting her cheeks and long blonde hair. She even had a large flower in her hair. The naga stared down at Felix with irregular colored eyes. Her right eyes were blue and her left eye was green. Felix feared that he had been saved only to be eaten by another monster. However, he was surprised when the giant face, that was uncomfortably close by the way, asked in a sincere voice of concern, "Are you alright?"

Felix was shocked by the kind and sincere voice. From what Fakira had told him about giant nagas, he had thought the naga would gobble him up within seconds. He couldn't believe that this one was being so kind. "Maybe this one doesn't eat humans. Maybe she's like Fakira," Felix thought. "I... I'm not hurt," Felix informed the giant naga with a fearful voice. The giant naga seemed to sound gentle and kind, but she was still a stranger and a giant Felaryan naga. Plus, her giant face being so close to Felix made him very uncomfortable.

The giant naga sighed and said, "Good, I was worried I might have hurt you when I caught you."

"Hey! Give me back my snack you human loving skin shedder!" the nasty voice of the female dridder screamed.

Fakira had been worried for Felix's safety when he was caught by a giant naga and she was going to grow him. However, when the female dridder called the giant naga a human lover, she stopped herself from growing him. "Human lover? Is this naga like me and sees humans as people?" Fakira wondered. Fakira had heard rumors of some Felaryan predators that saw humans as people and how they could even get along with other giant predators, as long as that predator didn't eat any friends. Hell, she had heard that even some of the predators that enjoyed eating humans that would somehow befriend a predator that didn't eat humans become friends with the human friends of the "human lover". It sounded like an odd complexity, but it somehow happened.

"No! I will not give you this human," the giant naga yelled as she wrapped her hand around Felix and brought him against one of her bare decently large breasts, "How could you even try to eat him. Can't you see that he's still a child? Have you no mercy at all?"

"This is Felarya. It's survival of the fittest. Large creatures eat smaller creatures. That's just how the world works. How long are you going to lie to yourself about this nature?" the female dridder questioned.

"I will not let you eat this human or any other humans for that matter when I'm around," the giant naga replied, "So free your captives and leave this place."

"I think not." The female dridder smiled.

The giant naga noticed that the male dridder was no longer in the same place and she realized he must have been behind her. Just as the dridder leaped, the giant naga shifted her body over the side while her tail still wrapped around the branch. The male dridder jumped over the naga and the naga swung around back to the top of the branch, but not before socking the female dridder in the face in the process. "This is your last chance!" the naga informed them.

"I will not be ordered around by a fucking snake skin!" the female dridder hissed. The female dridder leaped at the naga, but the naga lifted her free hand and a gust of wind threw the dridder off balance and she had to land on another branch. The male dridder leaped for the naga, but she spun around and let go of the branch, smacking the dridder with her tail in midair. The giant naga wrapped only a little bit of her tail around the branch and swung upside down. With her free hand, she grabbed another branch and swung from branch to branch in this fashion, just as fast as the dridders' leaps.

"Fakira, what's going on?" Solita yelled from the other web.

"A giant naga has Felix, but I think she's trying to help us. Is Ted okay?" Fakira asked, wanting to know if all her friends were safe.

"Yes, he's under me, but he seems to be fine and not getting squished," Solita informed Fakira.

Fakira was glad that her other friends were okay and she looked back at the battle. The battle had turned in favor with the giant naga as she had the male dridder in a death lock with her powerful tail. She was constriction his upper body with her tail. "Let him go!' the female dridder screamed.

"Only if you let your captives go and leave. If you try anything funny, I will kill him," the giant naga demanded.

"You wouldn't," the female dridder replied.

"You willing to risk your mate's life?" the giant naga questioned.

"Please, just do as she says," the male dridder pleaded weakly.
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