This choice: Climb up | Go Back Chapter 4: Slipped (ID #717694) an addition by: teniko ![View teniko's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author You felt your hands burn as you gripped onto the bath, telling yourself to contine, to make it to the top. You heard a small splash eco around you, encouraging you to continue. One foot after another, you slowly crawled to the top, hoping it was worth it.
You let your feet patter on the sides of the path as you gazed at the naked demon. Next gen's angelic face seemed to intencify in beauty as she lay down with her eyes closed. Her curvy figure seemed to shimmer on the soft surface of the water as her hand floated on the waters edge. Her cat ears twitched slightly as the white hair of the young angel spiraled out in the misty water.
You smiled at her, basking in the glory. Not concentrating on the next step. A gasp fell over your lips as your foot slipped over to meet air. With a squeek and a plop you plummeted down into the merky depths of the water unnoticed.
You gazed around the fog at the girls swaying feet as she drifted off into a sleep, her bum shifted in the murky waters before you as she ajusted herself with a moan. Your determined hands grasped out in an attempt to swim up, hoping to make it out alive and well. Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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