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Shrunk,Trampled Or Transformed Unaware
4 Stories in 1 (All unaware) 2 Involve Shrinking , 1 is TF and the other is trample
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  Chapter 7: Comfy pebble.   (ID #723283)
    an addition by: Past Member 'heins'  More by this author

Josh stay quiet, trying to think in other things, but the smelly air and the pressure over his body is making he suffer a lot. Minutes seems like hours and hous seems like days. Everthing is dark and smelly. Then, Josh feels the toes pinning his head, more and more. Suddenly, it stops. But soon, starts again. "Mom is playing with me?" You thought. "She thinks that I'm a peeble or something else!"
Some hours has passed and the freedon not come. But Josh feels the pressure geting light until he breathe better. The foot was geting out and the tiny boy could see some light. Josh try to get up and walk to the exit. But suddenly the foot stop and is geting inside again. The little boy is now pinned under his mom's big toe.
"Mom!" Josh shout, but only the big toe is enough to muffle he cries. "Look in your... Ugh... Shoe!"
Diane is playing with her pebble. The big toe is pinning the little victim. Josh starts to squirm, triying to be noticed.
"Humm" Diane moans. "This pebble is so good. How could it get in my shoe?"
Then, she rolls Josh. The poor little one is now under the ball of his mom's foot. Then, she look at her shoe.
"I don't know how could you get there, but this is will be your new place. Hey... I'm talking with a simple pebble? Oh man..."
Then, she puts her feet completely, trapping Josh in the bottom of her foot. And she start to walk.
"So comfy" She said moaning. "Now I need another pebble to the other foot."
Josh's face is burried in the mature skin of his mom's feet. His brain is protesting. The body is in agony, being stepped and unable to move. His mom thinks that he is just a pebble to make her feet more comfy.
"I don't wanna be a pebble of my mom's feet!" Josh cry in his mind. And his mind feels muffled too. Diane's feet seems very powerful.
Hours has passed and with Diane back in home she...
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