This choice: Shopping | Go Back Chapter 5: Shoe Shopping (ID #798477) an addition by: mrbiggles ![View mrbiggles's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author "My black pumps are worn out and rusty and well smelly so i'm getting new shoes". You eyes widened . Usually you had to stay in your mother's spare shoe until she came back but she looked in a better mood . "Aww why not Max you're coming with me". You saw the long hand of Tina come up to you and grab you like a pen . You were lifted up in the air as if you were on top of the world and came crashing down into hell which was your stepmother's purse . "Now I know you get into mischief so i'm zipping my purse so I won't need to worry ". You saw a bright light slowly closing until it was pitch black.
You wake up to your stepmother's arm reaching for her wallet and you are brought up with it . You see her and the shoe store manager talking . The manager had black hair and was very curvy if not sexy for a older woman . She was about in her early forties and was a bombshell . You landed on the counter and neither women noticed you ."Tina those shoes you are buying are very comfy". You saw your stepmother's new shoes right beside you."Thanks Jan I like your shoes what are they". You peered over the counter to see Jan's shoes and boy did her legs match her face . The legs were slightly chubby but tanned beautifully . You saw the shoes were high heels but with the cheetah like pattern as the colour . You then saw Tina plop her shoes down on the floor next to Jan's to see whose were better . You felt an awful ranch as both women were now barefoot . Tina had a very smelly scent and she probably had toejam . Jan's smell wasn't as bad but she had VERY sweaty feet and she usually played with lint in her shoes . Lint was about the size of you ( UH-OH) . Just then Jan's manicured hand knocked you off the counter and you fell right into ...
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