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as you look up at the kitchen ceiling it is not clear to you what you have become next. you are aware of your mom walking into the kitchen talking to somebody.....its her friends sue and kerry.
they are chatting about plans for a party at the weekend...your mom makes them coffe.....
you can then see them all sat around you......."so im on the table" you think.... "what could i be?"
kerry , sue and your mom all light cigarettes as they chat drinking coffe....
after a moment the glowing red end of a cigarette hovers over your upturned face....YOUR THE ASHTRAY!!
kerry flicks the hot ash onto you....it lands on what to her would seem to be a normal part of the ashtray...but its your eye.......you cant see and as the ash cools it remains covering your eye...you shout out for help...but your words are not heard and your mouth is filled with sue and your moms ash. this goes on for several minits until your face is entirley covered and your mouth is full of the 3 womens cigarette ash...
sue finnishes first and slowly stubbs the cigarette out on your cheek, then kerry clumsilly stubbs hers out on your lips....lastly its your mom......she grinds out her cigarette into your eye.....you are in agony....but also on a certain level its exiting.......
the ladies clear up to leave the house and your mom picks you up and empties the stubs and ash into the bin..you feel strange and realise that you are now .......
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