This choice: Mom Comes In | Go Back Chapter 5: Mom Comes In (ID #794809) an addition by: mrbiggles ![View mrbiggles's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author Tom waited for what seemed like an eternity, maybe five minutes, and he saw her legs appear and she climbed back in the chair. Tom was suddenly nervous, “maybe this isn’t a good idea”, He thought. Then before he knew it, her left foot stretched out and descended on his face. The dummies they use for the haunted house are made to feel like people, they are thick and heavy. Obviously, she didn’t notice anything because her left high-heeled foot landed squarely on his face. The sole hit his forehead, almost directly in the center and the heel of the foot landed and scraped down his right temple. She did a lot of twisting and adjusting, it was at that point that he felt her right shoe land on his throat. Tom froze…he didn’t know what to do. Tom waited. She continually fidgeted and twisted her feet. Her heels scraped the side of his head and neck. At one point she rested her right foot only on its heel, and the spike sank painfully into his throat. Tom could breath, but the pain was excruciating. All he know is that what seemed like a good idea, became dangerous. Her left foot slid around, crushing his nose. She slid that shoe up and forward, and the heel
suddenly found his right eye. she was only sitting, but even her leg weight added to the heel doesn’t feel very good on his eye. He did all he could do not to cry out, then he had to try and move. He turned his head slightly, she felt it. He thought, “oh shit, here it comes, I’m busted”, but
no, she didn’t look. She lift her left foot off of my face and then leaned back started kicking his head back into position. The toe of her shoe struck him 3 or 4 times, he had to turn his head and when he did, plop, her foot was back on his face. That was okay because her heel wasn’t in his eye anymore Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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