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The Necklace's Curse
Necklace = chaos.
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  Chapter 10: Explain things to her   (ID #1021215)
    an addition by: Doctor Devi  More by this author

"Ok, so I found this necklace, it can do magic things and then I saw you making out with some muscular guy so I turned us into anime characters, that's Japanese cartoons if you didn't know, I was a pretty boy, you were cute and had pink hair and big eyes and the guy turned skinny and unattractive. You fell in love with me and he became depressed about it and ran away crying like a baby so I changed him back to normal but still had you in love with me. The next day, today, I was surprised to see you in bed with me. You became way too clingy on me and wouldn't give me space so I turned you back to normal and here we are now...don't hit me!"

Well, that was a mouthful. Jill, now knowing the whole story, lowers her head and clenches his fist as if she's ready to beat up Steven. He was prepared for it so he closed his eyes. However, he could only hear sob as she lets him go.

"Sniff sniff...waaaa...." she cried.

"What's the matter?" Steven asked "You didn't believe me, did you?"

"No, it's not that..." she continued sobbing "The truth is...I love you!"

"Really?" he gasps "But you always used to be so mean, aggressive and taken aback by my feelings..."

"I know, but it was really peer pressure..." she explained "I could never really reveal my love to you and not be laughed and ridiculed by everyone else...but now that we're together privately..."

Jill then slowly moves up to Steven and gives him a great big kiss.

"...I don't know what's going on right now...but I like it!" Steven thought to himself.

And so, that was it. That was how Steven and Jill became together. Maybe not so much in public though, but that would slowly change as their relationship grew stronger. Jill became a lot nicer to everyone around her too and she felt all the more better about it. Whether it was because of the necklace's influence or not remains a mystery, though Steven felt that everything was for real...

Speaking of the necklace, it disappeared following Steven and Jill's relationship but neither were concerned about it...for they had each other....

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