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  Chapter 10: She decides to try things out on some others   (ID #1145630)
    an addition by: PonyGirl  More by this author

Michelle goes outside and takes a walk, wondering how she might use this. As she was walking, she bumps into a senior girl at her school. It is Stephanie, one of the snootiest girls in the school. She is also one one the prettiest, which adds to her bad manors. She is tall and build to attract boys. She sneers at Michelle, "Watch where you are going to low-class slut!"

Michelle steps out of her way, and as she watches her go, she decides that Stephanie needs a lesson. She points the editor at her:
Name: Stephanie Hinshaw
Height: 5' 8"
Hair: Blonde
Physical Brithday: 5/9/1993
Mental Birthday: 15/9/1993
Bra Size: 36D
Shoe size: 6

She smiles and makes some changes:

Name: Stephanie Hinshaw
Height: 5' 8"
Hair: Dirty Blonde
Physical Brithday: 5/9/1993
Mental Birthday: 15/9/1997
Bra Size: 32A
Shoe size: 6
Comments: Straight hair. No fashion sense. Poor family. Lives in trailer park. Four weeks pregnant by her boyfriend, Mike Roberts.

As soon as she hit enter, Michelle marveled at the way Stephanie shrank! Soon, she was a shabbily dressed smaller girl with awful hair! Michelle laughed, she would not be so arrogant anymore! And Mike was known for his poor treatment of girls. If she was smart, she would never marry him, but with the younger mental age, she just might do it.
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