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Content Rating Notice: GC -- May Contain Graphic Content
Only For: 18 and Older, Not Easily Offended
  >> Interactive Story >> Adult >> ID #1601196  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
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Shrunken In The Grocery Store
A new twist on an old cliche. This time, you shrink in a grocery store.
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Avg Rating: (4)
This is an interactive story containing 28 chapters. Each chapter tells part of the story and (usually) ends with multiple choices. Click on a choice and you'll be lead to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, you will have the option to write it! Don't be shy... make an addition!
About This Interactive
The owner of this Interactive Story begins with this information and guidance:
You're in your local supermarket, picking up items for your dinner tonight, when you suddenly shrink down to mere inches in height. You start panicking, fearing the worst because no one will miss you. You just broke up with your significant other, your parents are dead and you're an only child. Now, it's up to you to figure out just what happened, how to fix it and whether or not you should, or even could, get help from a place full of strangers.


Rules, a few and all real simple:

1) No underage (under 16). I don't care how compelling, moving or well written that particular chapter is. I'll copy it, send it back to you and delete it from this post. *US legal characters only!*

2) You don't have to have perfect spelling or grammar, but please at least try. Use spell check!

3) a. Length isn't that big of an issue, but please make it at least a paragraph. No one-sentence posts unless it's a choice chapter. Even then, if you can elaborate, do it. b. Don't run your dialogues together.
Example:
(bad) "Johnny said I should eat you so I will" "no please don't eat me" "-giggle- too late!"
(good) "Johnny said I should eat you so I will!" She grinned down at the shrunken figure in her palm.
"No! Please don't eat me!" he begged, nearly sobbing.
She giggled maniacally. "Too late!" With that, she dropped him in her mouth and swallowed, tracing his descent with her hand.

4) Always give a second choice, even if you don't like that one or it's "Reader's Choice."

5) You can kill the character. He/she *is* mortal. But, don't just up and kill them because you don't like the storyline, please.


Other than those, have fun! I send points for good usage of my faves:

My faves: unbirth, cock vore/insertion (where the character isn't actually digested), maternal, breast vore, voyeur, gentle, violent, vaginal insertion, anal play.

Dislikes: FEET. Ick, really don't like 'em. If you do, that's fine. I won't delete as long as you follow the above rules. :)
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