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  Chapter 30: The Jigs Up   (ID #847050)
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"For those many murders, even if it's just to collect the bounty, your not exactly subtile." Zena said in a 'as a matter of fact' tone. Carmine swore under his breath seeing as Zena just blew his cover.

"Yah, subtile is one of his weak suits" Rick said pointing his thumb at the disguised Cheetah, "I mean he tried to set me on fire. Even though the whole thing was set up."

"Wait, you knew?" Carmine gasped.

"Yes, right when you stepped in, your tells are unique" Rick said putting down his hand and collecting his winnings, "and is that your fox friend or did you pick up a wolf with an outragiously fluffy tail?"

"WHY YOU!" Alexis roared, on the brink of leaping onto the table but was quickly stopped by Zena who said, "no fighting on my watch, all I want is a good card game."

"You can't get a good game out of this swindler" Carmine said folding his hand.

"I stopped swindling a long time ago" Rick said putting down another winning hand.

Zena smiled saying, "for obvious reasons."

"Actually, I did because it didn't fit my schedual" Rick admited, "I mean, I like the whole playing people thing, but it's too much planning for me."

Alexis growled when she pointed at another of Rick's winning hands saying, "it's obvious that he's cheating."

"I could just be very lucky" Rick pointed out, "besides, can you prove it?" Rick then folded up his sleeves and continued playing.

"You have certainly gotten better sense I last saw you" Zena said with a smirk, "though, I still can't seem to figure you out, you win all this money and yet you don't spend it on anything or hoard it somewhere."

"That's just my secret" Rick said with a smile as he continued playing.
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