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Captain syrups revenge
Long ago a boy defeated Captain syrup and made a fool out of her, its time for her revenge
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This is an interactive story containing 6 chapters. Each chapter tells part of the story and (usually) ends with multiple choices. Click on a choice and you'll be lead to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, you will have the option to write it! Don't be shy... make an addition!
About This Interactive
The owner of this Interactive Story begins with this information and guidance:
Alright Listen up and listen up good, Long ago in someone else's story there was a boy Named Shawki who defeated Captain syrup once and made a fool out of her, right now she is trapped in a dimension of nothingness but now she found a plan to bring Shawki back to the dimension leaving only him and her and the point of this story is to give Captain Syrup the chance of her life to get back at him, now here's a description:

Shawki: He's a 16 year old teen, he is invincible meaning that he cant die BUT he can feel everything thats being done to him. He also has super strenght but in the dimension all his powers are removed except for his invincibility making Captain syrups job allot easier!
Here a pic if you need refrence to the guy:

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs41/f/2009/005/a/6/Shawki_Gaia_style_by_tnyshawk.png...

Alright here's whats allowed:
-Captain syrup can torture shawki with any thing-
-Beating the crap out of him
-Steping all over his body
-Sitting on him (Face farting is allowed)
-No tickling, i mean seriously she's trying to hurt him not make him laugh
-You can make wither Her Grow into a Giantess or have Shawki Shrink But I dont think it will matter.
-If anyone Shrink/Grow happens Syrup can do anything/Put him anywhere
-Poop is allowed if you want
-Also Syrup can use a Powder to paralyze Shawki incase he tries to get away
-Syrup can have a ray that can change the size and wieght of someone so she can make herself fatter in order to squish Shawki and not let him get away

Thats all and Have fun!
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