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Beaten Up By Your Sister
Your younger sister beats you up and tortures you.
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  Chapter 4: You try and teach her a lesson   (ID #937089)
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Blood pumps in your ears and eyes. You don't care about what your mother will think anymore. This little bitch is going to get her ass kicked.

You run forward with a snarl and push her violently into a wall. Kelsey is too shocked to react, her eyes wide and mouth gaping. You slap her hard in the face, which makes her stumble. You jump on her. She's now trying to push you away with her hands, now screaming for you to stop. You grab her wrists to try and push them down. For some reason, though, you can't control them. You had no time to think how peculiar it was that you could not constrain the wrists of a girl a year younger than you, so you grab a fistful of her hair and pull on it instead.

Kelsey yelps, and both of her hands grab yours. In one surreal moment, she easily unfurls all of your fingers from your hair, and bucks you off her. You stumble to the floor.

Kelsey is looking at you, panting, not knowing what to think. Angry that she somehow got you off her, you clumsily get to your feet and charge at her again, while she is still on the ground. As quick as lightning, Kelsey kicks you directly in the stomach.

You curl up on the ground, moaning. Kelsey scrambles to her feet. She isn't scared anymore. She's pissed. You come to your feet and she comes at you, hand curled into a fist. You manage to block her punch with your hand, and give her a glancing blow on the jaw. Kelsey then gives you a punch on the back of the head which makes the room spin.

You cover your head with your hands while your little sister viciously rains blows on you, her face red, her teeth gritted, her dyed black hair all over her face.
She then lands a knee on your exposed chest and knocks the wind out of you again. You are now lying flat on your back, your arms at your sides, with your shorter little sister towering over you.

You could not believe this was happening. You were getting your ass handed to you by a 16-year old emo girl. You stare at Kelsey's face as you try to recover from the shock, and see a frightening change of expression. The most terrifying one he had ever seen.

First you could still see traces of fear and anger in her frumpy face, behind her ugly make up. Then you saw the fear totally wiped away, replaced by suprise and amazement as you laid on the floor of her bedroom. Then, her eyes gained focus and confidence, and her lips stretched into a malicious, vengeful, merciless smile.
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