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  Chapter 13: Do you deserve it?   (ID #928403)
    an addition by: Past Member 'heins'  More by this author

From someone outside, watching the scene, it was pretty simple. A 11 years old girl quietly raised her foot to crush a poor insect. She smiled and that was something that would last three seconds.
But for the insect, were the longest and most terrible moments of his ordinary life. The insect, which actually was a kid shrunk, and that was you, was desperate. While Adrianna brought her huge, dirty and stinky sole to crush you. You thought if the situation could be so unreal. A girl so young, but so evil would extinguish the life of his brother like he was just a pathetic bug? Yes, she could do it. As the sole neared, and the smell grew, you saw that it was most cruel reality: you sister will crush you like an insect and there is nothing you can do. Your last sight was Adrianna's face with pleasure and then only a stinky and slightly dirty sole. Then, a loudly "squish".
Without even knowing why, you were crushed by your younger giantess sister. Why she hated you so much? You lost your life without knowing.
"So fun!" Adrianna laughed as she stay with her pretty feet over your remains. "The sensation of crushing a shrunken brother is great. This was the best ending for one person that I did not like "
And then she lifted her foot to see your flattened body.
"There you are, brother, in your proper place in due state; completely crushed under my sweaty and dirty feet. I always saw you as a stupid bug and finally you had the end that an bug deserves. "
And saying this, she put her foot down, and left the room, with the remains of your body completely stuck in her giant stinky and sweaty sole.
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