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Content Rating Notice:  Recommended for Readers 18 Years and Older Only
  >> Interactive Story >> Adult >> ID #1733068  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
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18+
A MAU Find...
Giving help lands a guy a box and a chance to change his family's life...
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This is an interactive story containing 547 chapters. Each chapter tells part of the story and (usually) ends with multiple choices. Click on a choice and you'll be lead to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, you will have the option to write it! Don't be shy... make an addition!
About This Interactive
The owner of this Interactive Story begins with this information and guidance:
20 year old Stephen Parks, on his way home from school, stopped to help an old man who was in grave peril. For his kindness, the old man gave Stephen a small box and smiled before leaving. Taking it home, and opening it, he begins to unravel what the box is, why the old man gave it to him, and what exactly the old man really was...

Characters...
Stephen Parks-20 years old, College Junior
Miranda & Amanda Parks-18 years old, Freshman Seniors (younger twin sisters)
Darren J. Parks-47 years old, Father
Andrea M. Parks-46 years old, Mother
Tonya Mitchell-20 years old, College Junior (Loves Stephen secretly)

Notes:
1) Please use english! Also, grammar, people! We want this to be read!
2) Please don't kill people off, adding characters are fine though! Also, limit everything to just between humans...no animal changes
3) Leave at least two options at the end of chapters..gives us the chance to expand the story!
4) Sex? Why not? It's an adult piece, use it!
5) Write in the Third person (i.e. instead of saying "you" or "I", say "Stephen did..")

Please add a chapter whenever you can. If I keep it, I'll send some points along! Thanks for the first new posters to the story! Keep it up and the more people add, the more we can develop this story. This is a second version of the story with plot changes and hopefully a better flow to it. Enjoy!
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