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Shrunk By An Alien.
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  Chapter 17: The Prisoners arrive.   (ID #397440)
    an addition by: Mad Dog  More by this author

The next morning, a couple of dozen prison buses pull up outside the courthouse. The fishtank you're in has been placed in one of the windows, which has been opened, so you have a pretty good view. The cages in the buses are unlocked and the prisoners get off the buses, followed by the heavily armed guards. In all, there must be close to one hundred prisoners. To your surprise, about thirty of them are women.

From a car that had followed behind the buses, the man in the suit from yesterday appears and walks toward your mom.
"Well", you hear him say. "Here they are...you're prisoners. And we err...brought their files too....so you know who's who". He gives your mom a couple of memory sticks.
"You're early", your mom replies cheerfully. "Good boy". She looks over at the oranged jump suited prisoners, who've been organised into a large squad, rather like a military unit. She then turns her attention back to the man in the suit.
"You may go now!" she says with a dismissive wave of her hand.
The man stands there with a look of surprise on his face.
"Or would you prefer to join your friend, the general?" She grins as pats her stomach.
"Err...no...no of course not", the man replies, with a look of horror on his face. "I was..just..err..just..leaving".
He swiftly turns and starts walking back toward the car.
"He isn't dead, by the way", your mom calls after him.
"What?" The man asks as he turns around.
"The general...he isn't dead. I kept him alive. In my stomach. I'm thinking of giving him to his wife..as a slave".
The man stares at your mom for a while, then he gets into the car and drives away.
"Now then," your mom says as she walks toward the prisoners. "I suggest you guards get back on your buses and leave...unless you want to share the fate of all the other guys around here".
The guards don't need telling twice. They quickly get back on the buses and get out of town as fast as they can.

Your mom orders a couple of the other town's women to remove the restraints of the eight female prisoners who meet the requirements for becoming one of your mom's, 'sisters'. One in particular is strikingly beautiful. She's a tall blonde woman, approximately 6'2". She looks to be in her early twenties. You're pretty sure you've seen her before somewhere. Your mom notices her too.
"Do I know you?" she asks as the young blonde woman walks toward your mom.
"Holy shit!" your mom says in shock. "You're Ellie Chambers".
"Who?" asks Diana, who's been standing to your mom's right.
"The press called her 'Hannibal Chambers'. After Hannibal Lecter, you know, from that movie. Silence of the lambs. Because she killed her boyfriend...and ate his liver".
"Shit!" Diana exclaims. "I remember. It was two years ago. She ate the boyfriends brother's liver too. They called her the world's first female cannibal".
"Actually," Ellie says with a grin, and in a kind of sexy southern drawl "I ate pretty much every bit of them it was possible to eat. They were delicious. And I made some pretty nice leather mini skirts from their skins. Anyway, they deserved it. That son of a bitch used beat the crap out of me. Then him and dipshit brother decided they were gonna rape me. Then they planned to kill me, cut me up and ditch me in the river. Too bad for them I found out, and struck first".
"Oh you're gonna fit right in here", your mom says in awe.
"Where's here?" Ellie asks as she looks around at the town. "And why are there only women? Where're all the men? I could use a little...company after being locked away for two years".
"Well," your mom replies. "We call this town Goddessville. And if you're a good girl..you can have all the men you want". After a few seconds thought, your mom says, "actually, you can have pretty much any guy you want if you're a bad girl".
Your mom waves a hand in the direction of the other prisoners. You hear a number of gasps as six of the prisoners on the front row suddenly disappear. Their clothes drop to the floor, like the general's uniform had done yesterday. Your mom and Diana walk over to the piles of clothes and, after sifting through them, they retrieve the now shrunken convicts. Your mom hands two of them to two of the town's women. She walks back to Ellie and offers her third shrunken con.
"How the fuck did you do that?" Ellie asks, a mixture of fear and disbelief in her voice.
"Goddessville", your mom replies. "We're all goddesses here. And soon..you will be too". She holds the third convict up and again offers him to Ellie.
"What's this?" Ellie asks as she takes hold of the six inch tall man and examines him closely.
"Breakfast" your mom replies. "Y'see Ellie...men are what we want to them be here. And I'm sure he won't mind being a beautiful young woman's breakfast. Think of it as a test. You can become a goddess. Immortal, all powerful. Able to do whatever you want. All you have to do to earn that honor, is to eat that little scumbag".
Ellie looks at your mom for a seconds. "I can stay young and beautiful forever?" She asks.
Your mom nods her head.
"I won't ever die?"
"Nope" your mom replies. "And you will powers you can't even imagine...yet".
"And all I have to do...is eat this litte guy?"
Your mom nods her head again.
They're not too far away. And despite being just six inches tall, you can see the abject terror on the shrunken prisoner's face.
Ellie thinks for a couple of minutes. Then she shrugs her shoulders and grins evilly as she looks at the little man trapped in her coiled fist.
"What the hell", she says. "To tell the truth..I've kinda missed the taste man meat. I told my boyfriend's parents that I enjoyed eating him..and his brother. And I did enjoy it. So...", She lifts the struggling prisoner up to her face. "I hope they taste as good raw as they do cooked. The bones'll be a bit crunchy".
You see the man cover his head with his arms in a futile protective gesture, as Ellie slides the top half of the man's body into her mouth. You want to look away, but you're transfixed. Ellie bites down hard. You can hear the sickening crunch as her teeth slice through his body. On seeing Ellie devour the shrunken prisoner, the other cons make a break for it. It's actually quite a comical sight, their hands and legs are shackled, preventingt them from running properly. They're easily captured. Ellie puts the lower half of the dead con's body in her mouth and quickly consumes it, licking her smiling lips as she does so.
"Not bad", she says as she licks blood from the fingers of her right hand. "I still prefer them cooked. Although the crunchy bones were quite satisfying. So...do I pass the test?"
"Yeah", your mom replies with a laugh. "You pass the test. Welcome to the sisterhood".
Your mom's whole body suddenly glows bright white, and then the glow flies towards Ellie, who gasps as the glow is absorbed into her body.
"Now..you're a goddess". Your mom looks to the window your tank is in, and smiles when she sees you.
"C'mon", your mom says. "I'll introduce you to some of our...toys".
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