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Shrunk By An Alien.
Nick is shrunk by an alien.
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  Chapter 18: The Little Prisoners.   (ID #402288)
    an addition by: Mad Dog  More by this author

By now the prisoners, minus the eight women, and the prisoner that Ellie ate, have been shrunk, stripped naked and placed inside three fish tanks. The bad attitudes they'd originally displayed have been replaced with fear. And with good reason.
"Which tank are the rapists in?" your mom asks as she walks toward the three tanks, with Ellie and Diana following close behind.
"That one" says Janice, the mom of one of the kids from your class, as she points to the tank in the middle.
"Hope you little shits don't mind getting wet", your mom says with an evil grin.
She waves her right hand, and with a bright flash of light, a big, steel urn appears above the tank. All the prisoners look up at it. But they can't see the steam rising from the top of the urn. Suddenly, the urn tip over, and about 12 litres of boiling hot water drops into the tank. The prisoners tanks are quite close to yours, and despite them being only a few inches tall, you can hear the agonised screams of the two dozen men inside. All the women smile as they watch the shrunken rapists splashing around and writhing in agony in the boiling water.
"Oooh, that looks really hot" Ellie says with a grin. "They're all as red as lobsters".
She plucks one out of the water.
"Ow!" She exclaims as she drops the prisoner on the table. "It is hot". The waves a hand over the prisoner and he slowly grows to eight inches.
"What're you doing?" your mom asks.
"Trying my new...talents", Ellie replies.
A flash of light and knife appears next to the prisoner, who's trying to stand up. As Ellie had said, his skin is as red as a cooked lobsters and he's obviously in agony. He looks down at the knife.
"Pick it up" Ellie says.
The prisoner slowly looks up at her.
"I said pick it up you little fuck!" She says angrily.
The prisoner reaches out and takes hold of the knife with his right hand. He then gets to his feet.
"Now", Ellie says with an evil grin. "Cut your cock and your balls off".
The other women in the room chuckle loudly. The prisoner shakes his head and drops the knife.
"How long do you think it would take me to eat you, if I did it real slow?" Ellie asks. "And how much do you think it would hurt, to be eaten alive, feet first? Now...cut..your fucking...cock...and balls off".
Slowly, the prisoner reaches down and picks up the knife.
"DO IT", Ellie shouts.
The prisoners thinks about it for a while longer, and then does as he's told. The women laugh as they watch the shrunken prisoner hack off his own genitals, screaming in agony as he does so.
"That's better", Ellie says with a smile. The prisoner is now writhing on the floor with his hands covering his groin. There's a large pool of blood around his middle.
"Won't be hurting anymore women", Ellie says. "Now stand up you little piece of shit".
The prisoner struggles to his feet, his blood soaked hands still covering his groin.
"Not much of a man now, are you?" she asks coldly. "I'll stop the bleeding for you", she says. "And take away the pain. If you beg me to use you for a dildo".
The prisoners looks horrified as he stares up at the giant women. But after a few seconds you see his mouth move. It's seems pain is a great motivator.
Ellie laughs as she stares down at the prisoner. Then she snatches him off the table, and stuffs down the front of her jeans head first.
"If you'll excuse me ladies", Ellie says as she licks her lips. "I've got two years of celibacy to put right".
With that, she turns and walks out of the courtroom.
"I think I'm gonna like her" your mom says after a few minutes.
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