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  Chapter 15: ... a doughnut store, with its doors broken down.   (ID #1246810)
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As Joey drives down the road you keep your eyes open for any sign of your plus sized brother who's searching for a way to fill his gut which is nearly twice the size as it was this morning.
"Hey Joe, slow down a bit," you call into the truck as you approach the mini strip mall. You scan the parking lot to see it's pretty empty looking. No real signs of life. You look into the vegetarian restaurant to see no signs of Mike.
"What are we looking for and what's up?" asks Kyle wanting some answers.
"Yeah, what's gotten into Mike to cause him to run off?" Joey asks also scanning for your brother.
"You wouldn't believe me if I told you," you say knowing the fantastic powers of the Wishing Powder are hard to explain.
"Ok, but what should we be looking for?" Kyle asks.
"Signs of a food crazed Mike," you answer sternly.
"Like that?" Joey asks pointing out the window.
You shift to the side and see the entrance to the bakery who’s doors look like they've been blown in.
"Yeah, that's most likely him," you nod and Joey quickly U-Turns into the empty parking lot and you jump out of the truck's bed and run up to the door to see that the door is a 'Pull' and looks like it's been crushed by something heavy. You look up to see your brother Mike standing behind the counter gobbling up all the pastries he can while the two young girls working the bakery cower close to the far corner of the store.

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