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Swallower at school.
college guy discovers vore abilities-can he control himself or "get some girls?"
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  Chapter 37: wait until the time is right   (ID #897925)
    an addition by: twlightking  More by this author

you watched as betty made some sandwitches as you began to drool at her sight. ' so officer jess never heard of you are you new to the force?" betty asked as she handed you your sand witch. you swallowed it in one gulp but tasted plain not like the women you loved to eat. " sure am wanted to meet this women eater sounds like quite the character." you said giggling tying to imitate jess's voice. betty looked at you. ' he killed 3 great officers in two days he needs to be killed as soon as possible." you laughed remembering how easy it was to get officer jill, kelly, and jan, had it only been two days it felt longer. " 20 girls are missing we have no idea how this killer does it and it all started at that damn school." betty said slamming her hands on the table. you were getting around it seemed people feared you they knew you were not to be crossed. this was easyer then you thought in just 2 days you got half the city afraid on what you were going to do to the women of it.

betty looked at you. ' my boyfriend has to work on that case now you might have met him his name is sam." you nodded. ' he is at eh girl's dorm with that Johnson guy." betty looked at you. ' never say that name Johnson is a dick he needs to leave the force he is treating us women like shit who cares if the women eater targets girls we can get him just as good as he can with his dumbass unit." Johnson was not that bright from what you saw of him last night he had no idea you ate the women who disappeared he must have thought you were a normal serial killer like the rest of these cops. only 3 people knew you ate the girls you targeted wendy, rachel, and luna. you wondered where luna was but the thought dropped your mind. just then you heard the back door open and a old lady entered the room. ' we found someone who might know who the women eater is.' she said and you and betty looked shocked.

you entered the interrogation room and there sat luna. her silver hair was still the same as it was last night and she was wearing a dress. and her father sat next to her. he was a big man with a beard and had a sliver streak in his hair kinda like luna's except the rest of his hair was black. " i'm luna's father and my store sold what killed these girls." the man said he did not give his name. ' i'm officer betty this is jill." betty said. the old women had left as soon as you entered so she was not involved. " ok i sell digestion drinks at my store it's supposed to help stomach problems i believe the women eater is using that to kill his victims." luna's father said and you looked shocked. it could not end like this luna had betrayed you even after you spared her life. " sir this could not be true if it was then this killer could swallow people whole and that can't happen." you told luna's father and then luna spoke up. ' algie eats women he thinks are evil but he has gone out of control he needs to be arrested please help us he has wendy and rachel kidnapped you got to help us." luna sat down and you looked at her. ' little miss stop lying to us we have more important things to deal with right now. ' you said and luna looked at you. ' algie has powers he is not human anymore i think he can also turn into other girls and you might be algie.' betty looked at you. " you never been here before how do i not know your not this algie.' this was just great now what.
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