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Swallower at school.
college guy discovers vore abilities-can he control himself or "get some girls?"
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  Chapter 11: rachel's fate   (ID #905503)
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there was rachel and she looked pissed. " so you ate another girl huh algie.' she said about to punch you. you fell down as rae and wendy moved around in your belly. " algie thats it i'm done with you if your just going to eat other girls even thoe we had a date.' you laughed. " you cancelled the date rachel remember.' rachel kicked you in the stomach. " hey stop that it's wet in here.' said rae. rachel looked even more furious. ' you ate rae oh thats it algie thats it." rachel looked at you with fire in her eyes. rachel kicked you 3 more times. " i never want to see you again ever algie give me back my stuff you borrowed our friend ship is over you fat pig." rachel said with one last kick and she ran away crying.

you got up. ' wait rachel wait i'm sorry.' rachel was just about to open the door when she looked at you." why did you eat them and not me algie?" you looked at rachel. she wanted to be eaten you knew this. " i thought you loved me algie i thought i'd be your first meal not your x." rachel said crying on your shoulder. " is this what this is about me not eating you?" rachel nodded. " I was just jelous algie i'm sorry.' rachel kissed you. rachel let go of you and looked at you. " eat me algie eat me." rachel said un dressing. rachel and you sat down as rachel gave you her foot. you swallowed it and rachel sighed. " when i saw you ate wendy something came into me algie i'm sorry i know you like me and i like you so." you nodded as your mouth was full as you swallowed Rachel's feet. it was not just that you had eaten wendy that made rachel mad it was the fact you did not want to eat her when she asked. you sighed as you slowly swallowed rachel's leg. ' i know you only wanted to protect me algie you had no idea what would happen if you had swallowed me all the way." rachel said sighing as she started to close her eyes as you swallowed her hips. rachel was delious and tasted just as you thought she would. each girl you ate tasted better then the last yu hoped the next girl if there was a next girl would taste better then rachel. you swallow rachel's chest as she sighed even more. she had fallen asleep so this was more relaxing then when you ate rae. you get to rachel's breasts and she sighed even more. you got to her head and you swallow the rest of her down.

you felt a thud in your gut and a splash. ' damn she fell asleep i can't believe rachel would let herself get eaten we did not have a choice .' said wendy. you laughed and rae and wendy kicked you again. " ow hey you'
ll wake rachel.' you said and rachel said. " it's so nice in here i want to stay in here forever.' wendy and rae giggled. ' he did drink something that will psit us out but now that there are 3 of us it might take longer then a day.' rae sighed. rachel giggled. ' good i like being in here algie take us home.' wendy sighed. ' one moment your pissed at him and the next your fine damn rachel are you bi polar?" rachel said nothing as you tried to get up. the new wight made it hard for you to get up but you made it. ' my back is going to hurt like hell by the end of this." you said and wendy and rae both kicked you again. ' thats for calling us fat.' they both said at the same time. you finally got to your car and was about to go to your apartment.
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