Escape From Vore Island
        by Jaedon  (irenicuz@Writing.Com)
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  Chapter 13: What The Mare Wants The Mare Gets   (ID #487421)
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The mare struggles to regain her breath. "Slave girl something has gone terribly wrong."

Emily looks worried as she replies to the horse, "What's wrong mistress? Did the ritual not work?"

The mare neighs, "No the ritual was a complete success, by swallowing his man-juice my powers have made him my obedient slave. Just like how I gained control of you by swallowing your pussy juice. I gave him the larger cock for when I feel like being pleasured."

To your shock you realize that the mare is right. You now feel unconditionally loyal to the horse. You know that you will obey your Mistress' every whim without question.

"If the ritual succeeded then what has gone terribly wrong Mistress?" Emily asks the mare as she unties the ropes from your wrists.

The mare replies, "Four other humans have washed up on the island."

“Mistress, I think it must be Ben, Lee, Sarah and Becky.” You comment, “They were with us when our ship sank.”

“Yes those are their names.” The mare confirms.

“What’s so bad about that Mistress?” Emily asks, “You could make them your loyal slaves like us.”

“I intend to do just that when we find them.” The mare whinnies in amusement, “The problem is that those fools are going deep into the island’s jungle. There are beings in there just as powerful as I am. Some of those being will try to claim them as slaves for themselves. However most of those beings will just use them to fill their bellies or another empty orifice.”

Normally hearing something like that would upset you. But you discover that you only care about serving your Mistress. The fate of your four friends doesn’t matter at all.

“Why is that a problem Mistress?” You ask curiously.

“It’s a problem because I want those four as MY slaves!” The mare shouts, “But if they get devoured or claimed by another being my new slaves will be stolen from me!”

The fact that your Mistress is upset has you and Emily upset as well. Both of you would do anything to make your Mistress happy. Even if it means making your four friends join you and Emily as the horse’s slaves.

“How can we help you claim your new servants Mistress?” You and Emily ask without hesitation.

The mare smiles and replies…
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