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Escape From Vore Island
Stranded on an island of Vore, survive. Easy, no?
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This choice: She decides to consume you (sacrifical) | Go Back

  Chapter 8: Commentary   (ID #863743)
    an addition by: safire_diaz  More by this author

"Hm," Obsoxelia observes you playfully, dangling you between her tapered claws of cobalt. Blood splurts out from your main veins, making you gasp with the pressure mounting between your shoulders. "Not bad, for a little skimpy dressed suit," she comments, enjoying making you wince with every biting comment, "And those abs," she continues to drool at your pecs. But somewhere in the back of your mind, you have niggling doubt at those carefully worded praises. She leans towards you, making you cringe with how close she was pandering your muscles.

"Even the sweetest nectar has its venom," Obsoxelia coaxes continuously, working her jungle magic upon you and you are spell-bounded by her necessities, your eyes turn towards her bust, but she awaits carefully, patient. As if she was awaiting for something sinister to occur... ZIP! Immediately you feel her slick soft prehensile tongue and you shiver involuntarily as it curls upon your 'hot meaty lump' of a body as you hallucinate from the sensations she gave you. Shocked, you try to pull away, but she arises thriumphant in her newfound victim and you shut your eyes from the inevitable horror of this all. You! Jaedon! Being tricked by this arcane fiend! The last thing you see before closing is her laughing throatily at your gullibility.

When you reawaken, you find yourself in a dark and dank chamber. To your shock, you don't recognise this environment at all. You look around and you realise you can't see a thing, so you are stumbling around in the oppressing darkness for awhile. The voices of others trapped arise around you. Large gizzard-stones were scattered around you, you inch away from them. They looked slimy and... oozing with chemicals. Undoubtedly you are trapped and contained within this fiend.

You panic and try to stab the walls, and they seep blue blood. Ah! You are squeamish and you feel faint. "Where is this place, it's unlike any body." You trail off, seeing as you're out of options. There was another hole, leading to beyond the gizzard.
"Hello?!" yells another female voice next to your ears, "I hate being trapped here! It feels like a millennium since we saw daylight! It's like a labrinyth in here!" The thunder of blood in your ears implode as the walls convulse.
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