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Rogue Jedi
A young Jedi falls to the dark side and becomes a menace to the New Republic
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  Chapter 4: Coming in for a landing on New Citidel Station...   (ID #753713)
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Helene dropped out of orbit above the planet into the main restoration zone on Telos. A voice on her communication device chimed in. "Unknown fighter, please disable all weapons on your ship and dock with the following visitor pass code in docking bay 3, these instructions will be obeyed. That is all."

Helene was surprised at the treatment of the Telosian government, but would obey the rules. She grew up of stories of how the Sith almost wiped out the galaxy, and in most eras, Telos and of the times of great suffering in this portion of the galaxy, but now enough to merit martial law. Maybe she was over-thinking this? "Unknown pilot, please exit your fighter and surrender all effects for investigation."

She was reluctant to show all of her things to the Telosians. Mostly due to a certain special tool on her belt. Considering the history of the planets Sith occupation, it was not suprising that they may be afraid of the Jedi's tool, usually misunderstood as a Sith weapon.

"Here..." Placing her stuff into a tray before her. "...my provisions, pass key for my ship, my personal effects, (which included a holocron of her father and mother and a notebook), and THIS." She placed her Lightsaber into the tray, fully aware that she can get it back with but a thought, but willing to let them see it.

The Telosian security guards knew immediately what it was and...
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