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a new day
a 19 year old finds he has the ability to control minds or swallow people
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This choice: Time to say goodbye to the goth chick. | Go Back

  Chapter 10: So Long to the Goth Chick   (ID #489189)
    an addition by: Deathstalker  More by this author

Getting up from the bed, you adjust your clothes and leave the goth’s room in search of the bathroom. You find it strange, after all the noise you and her made, that her mother hadn’t bothered to even check. She must really be in a drunken blackout to not hear her daughter getting fucked and swallowed whole.

Finding the bathroom, you go in and shut the door behind you, heading over to the toilet and dropping your pants. Sitting down, you don’t find it very difficult to push the goth’s remains out of your body and into the waiting bowl. Once you finish, you wipe yourself clean and stand, pulling your pants back up. Turning to look down into the bowl, you take a last look at what had been a sexy, young goth chick only an hour or so ago. You notice a couple glistening pieces of metal lodged amidst the rest. Apparently, nipple piercings aren’t digestable after all.

You grin at the thought, thinking about all it means. Not only can you kill people by swallowing them whole, but the only evidence left behind is easily disposed of with…

You reach forward and hit the flusher. The goth’s remains are quickly whisked away, down into the sewer, never to be seen again.

Feeling quite excited with the possibilities of your new ability, you head out of the bathroom. Now, what about that deadbeat mom? How dare she let her children be devoured, digested and shit out like so much waste! She needs to pay…
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