This choice: Nareen changes her mind. | Go Back Chapter 6: Nareen changes her mind. (ID #455880) an addition by: Mad Dog ![View gunbunny's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author "No", Nareen says softly.
"I beg your pardon?" you ask, somewhat confused.
"I said, no", she replies. "I've changed my mind. You know that gave me pleasure. More pleasure than I've ever known. I would like to know it again",
You're in total shock. "Are you saying that you WANT me to keep your daughter as my penis, so that you can enjoy having sex with me?" you ask.
"Yes", she replies softly "My husband has neglected me for several years. What you did to me was...liberating".
"Nareen" Jamon says, obviously in complete shock. "You..you can't".
"Oh shut Jamon!" Nareen spits with contempt as she jumps of the bed and stands in front of him. "I know why you neglected me. Did you think I wouldn't find out about your young slut? The only thing that surprised me, was finding out that she...was a HE. You favored a boy over me. A boy? He's barely older than Yeena was".
She then turns around and walks back toward the bed.
"You want a whore?" she asks with a smile. "I'll be your whore..happily..forever. All I ask is that you allow me to take revenge".
You slowly stand up, feeling somewhat amused. You've hated Jamon for years. He was never afraid of you, sometimes openly opposed you. And it made other rulers a little more brave. Until you conquered them.
"I wanted a wife", you say softly, looking into Nareen's jade green eyes. "Not a whore. You will be my wife. I will give you immortality, make you young again. And yes...you may have your revenge".
"Nareen", Jamon says in a pitiable voice.
Nareen walks back to him and slaps his face, hard.
"Our daughter", he says pathetically.
"What daughter?" she asks sternly. "Do you think I would have allowed you to touch me, had I known where your preferences lay?
"Jyk can keep her. And I will take pleasure from her as his penis. She will learn to love her new life. And you can know that it's your fault".
She then turns to you. "Timus", she says, "His name is Timus. I want him".
you gesture to two of the hastati. "Find him, take him to my dungeon".
The two hastati bow their heads and leave your chambers.
"Would you like to know what I'm going to do to your little boywhore?" Nareen asks Jamon. "I've spent some time in the kitchen, and with the butchers. And the seamstresses. Learning. First, I'm going to skin him. Next, I will make him, and you, watch as make his skin into something I can wear. And then he will watch me try it on. Then, I'm going butcher him, slowly. I'm sure Jyk will know a spell to keep him alive. Because then, you will watch cook him, and then you will watch US", she gestures to you. "Eat him. I will keep his head as a trophy. I may even see if it can be kept alive. To suffer".
She walks over to you and whispers in your ear. You walk over to Jamon and smile, then you hold out your hand and shrink him to ten inches.
You pick him up and hand him to Adeera, the captain of the Hastati.
"Nareen is now my Queen" you say to her. "At the earliest opportunity, that will be made permanent. You will obey her commands",
"Yes your majesty," Adeera replies as she bows her head.
"I would like to be alone with my...king" Nareen says and stands beside you. "You may take that", she points at Jamon, "And use it for your pleasure. And then let the other Hastati take their turn with him".
"Thank you...your majesty" Adeera says with another bow of her head.
"Then bring him back her", Nareen continues. She looks down at the shrunken man. "There will be a cage waiting for you", she says to Jamon. "That will be your home from now on. You're going to live a long, miserable life Jamon. You will watch us make love, knowing what it is I'm enjoying. You will watch us devour those that you held dear and one day, I will allow you to die. Then I will eat you".
Nareen waves the other three Hastati away, the bow and leaves the chambers.
"Take me back to bed", Nareen says. "I need more pleasure".
"Certainly", you reply with a grin. Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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