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Elizabeth could see the seriousness on the face that used to be hers so she backed down and said"Yes mother."Dave turned and left the room.He wanted to try a cigarette when his mom suggested it even though he never considered it before.He went back to his parent's bedroom and found his mom's pack on the nighttable with her lighter.He looked at the bed and wondered what would have happened if his dad wanted a little action before he went to work.Dave was glad his father let who he thought was his wife sleep .He wasn't ready for sex especially as his mom.Dave put one of the long allwhite cigarettes in his mouth. He tried but couldn't get the lighter to make a flame.He got angry and threw the lighter at the wall cursing as he did so. He put the cigarette back in the pack and decided on a cup of coffee instead .He walked to the kitchen.His dad had made a fresh pot before he left.Dave took a cup and filled it up adding milk and sweetener like Elizabeth took it.He sat crosslegged and sipped it .It tasted good.Looking at his legs Dave felt his mom needed to tone up.They had too much cellulite on them.
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