Hi DickandJane
I don't often give out 5 ratings, but, I didn't want to take any chances. What you have here, just might be Holy. If not,... I don't want to be standing next to you, should a bolt of lightning come out of the clear blue sky.
Well done! When you think about how many times the Bible has been re-written, over the course of history! It's about time somebody finally got it right!
1 All tha spellin checks out.
2 All tha teeny sqiggley thangs are where they otter be.
3 An "I DO BELIEVE" ye'all improved on tha grammer, from tha orignale vershun.
My favorite part was how, "the night time and the daytime, and all the other times, got together and made up the days.(it always worked out) , (very comforting)
I wasn't too happy that it had NOTHING TO DO WITH HOCKEY, but, I'm hopefull Jesus will play in net for the, Nazareth Apostiles, in the new testiment.
Jesus saves.
Thanks for the laughs. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Cheers
Joel aka Brother Nature