Review of showering acts of joy member to member Giselle
Why I chose this piece: Anniversary review
Overall impression of piece: I think there is reality here. What is reality and how do we deal with it. We are all terminal. Most of us deny that until we are forced to do something else
Grammatical and spelling errors Attaching to get laid should be like a dash. I think it would accentuate it more
What I liked? It is obvious that Kathy and Conrad have a relationship, even if they haven't acknowledged it. This is hard to take so I am glad you didn't sugar coat it.
What I disliked: Mostly a dr would give alternatives and not say there was no hope. It has been studied to show how you tell bad news makes a definite difference
How the piece made me feel Appropriately rated, but within the context of the situation. I didn't feel that there was anything over the top or unrealistic. Maybe too abrubt a transition between the two women. I am not sure if anyone would have the coping skills for this
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