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Review #3714004
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 I Wish I Could Fly  [------]
I wrote this for the Pond Poetry picture of a flower blooming through a cement crack.
by dragonline
Review by Silent Heart
Rated: ------ | (4.0)
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I love your poem very much.It touched my heart and I also wish I could fly.
From your lovely topic you gave,catch my eyes soon.It is so close to heart.the way you mention it,the way you see your life back..you mention all the things in rhythmic way.

I love every line you wrote.
keep writing.

Love SH - Silent Heart.
   *CheckG* You last responded to this review 07/07/2013 @ 3:45pm EDT